stds-802-16: SYS REQ Comment

["Myers, William K." <WMyers@spectrapoint.com>]

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[Submitter's Last Name] 
Myers

[Submitter's First Name]
Bill

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change to:  *Media Access Delay - The protocol induced delay between the BTS
and the STS for an existing session (including flow control, jitter
buffering, etc. but excluding signalling).

[Reason for Edit]
Clarify MAC delay so as to not include session setup control.


[Submitter's Last Name] 
Myers

[Submitter's First Name]
Bill

[Starting Page #]
18

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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar,
etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change to:  " ... peak bandwidth requirements and load factor based on
quality of service guarantees."

[Reason for Edit]
Clarify that capacity is a function of peak bandwidths modified by each user
instaneous session loading factors and not the sum of all users times peak
bandwidths.