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stds-802-16: Draft 5 comments



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Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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Replace "Fixed Wireless Access" in the Wireless Solutions column of figure 1 with "802.16P-MP Radio".

[Reason for Edit]

It was always intended that one of the areas that would be serviced by our standard would be the residential market.

[Submitter's Last Name]

Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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Remove sentence that reads "Typical bands allocated for 802.16 use are very wide, allowing for the bands to be channilized."

[Reason for Edit]

The bands are not allocated for 802.16 use they are allocated for LMDS use.

[Submitter's Last Name]

Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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21

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Delete the sentence "The resultant topology is very similar the Hybrid fiber Coax (HFC) cable TV network."

[Reason for Edit]

The topology is in no way the same as an HFC network. Some of the access protocol may be similar but that is the only reason they are alike.

[Submitter's Last Name]

Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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Delete the Paragraph from line 40 to 44.

[Reason for Edit]

Errored seconds is not a measurement of availability. The paragraph is in error.

[Submitter's Last Name]

Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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None of the definition are in section 10.1 Vocabulary of Terms. At a minimum these definitions should be added to section 10.1. The definitions should be evaluated for correctness.

[Reason for Edit]

The Vocabulary Ad Hoc did not consider these definitions and did not include them in the vocabulary list.

[Submitter's Last Name]

Fishel

[Submitter's First Name]

George

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Change the column hearing "Bitrate(s)" to "throughput rate(s)"

[Reason for Edit]

The over-the-air bit rate contains additional overhead bits for things like forward error correction that should not be included in this column.