FW: SUB11 COMMENT: stds-802-16: Sub11: Functional Requirements Call-for-Comments

["Abu-Dayya, Adnan" <adnan.abu-dayya@attws.com>]

[Submitter's Last Name]
Abu-Dayya

[Submitter's First Name]
Adnan

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "from 1 GHz to 10 GHz" with "2 GHz to 11 GHz"

[Reason for Edit]
To be consistent with the PAR.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Abu-Dayya

[Submitter's First Name]
Adnan

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace "NLOS blockage" with "channel characteristics"

[Reason for Edit]
A more meaningful metric in link design.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Abu-Dayya

[Submitter's First Name]
Adnan

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
replace "will be a difficult problem for" with "will be a requirement  for"

[Reason for Edit]
The target markets "residential and small businesses" mandate a
non-line-of-sight requirement. Hence, the airlink should be robust in
multipath environments.


[Submitter's Last Name]
Abu-Dayya

[Submitter's First Name]
Adnan

[Starting Page #]
10

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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete "The 802.16.3 system capacity ...will also be difficult"

[Reason for Edit]
Not a very meaningful sentence; serves no purpose.

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Adnan Abu-Dayya, Ph.D.
Manager,  Technology Planning & Strategy
Wireless Local Technologies Group
AT&T Wireless Services
Redmond, WA

Tel: 425- 702-2838
Fax: 425- 702-3033
email: Adnan.Abu-Dayya@attws.com