stds-802-16: TG1 Comment

["Roger B. Marks" <marks@boulder.nist.gov>]

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Modify Figure 5 by showing the "SAP" directly below each convergence 
layer. In other words, create four copies of the SAP logo (the word 
"SAP" inside a hexagon; the hexagons should be smaller than the 
current one) and put a copy below each of the four convergence layer 
rectangles.

[Reason for Edit]
The current figure shows the SAP only as related to two of the 
convergence layers. In fact, it should be an element of all four.


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "MAC Service Access Point (MSAP)" to "Service Access Point 
(SAP)" and re-alphabetize this listing.

[Reason for Edit]
The term "SAP" is more common than "MSAP" in the document, and there 
is no need to use both.



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete "MSAP MAC Service Access Point".

[Reason for Edit]
Unnecessary since "SAP Service Access Point" is defined in the same list.




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "MSAP" to "SAP".

[Reason for Edit]
"SAP" is more commonly used in document and is already defined.





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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "MSAP" to "SAP" in both line 60 and line 61.

[Reason for Edit]
"SAP" is more commonly used in document and is already defined.




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "an" to "a".

[Reason for Edit]
Grammar.