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stds-802-16: TG1 Comment
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove sentence: A 32 bit CRC ....
[Reason for Edit]
Incorrect statement. Only connection with CRC specified add the CRC.
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Correct figure to 18 to include separate DL and UL message formats.
[Reason for Edit]
The current figure only reflects the UL situation correctly.
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove the four from 245-255
[Reason for Edit]
Editorial mistake
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Eklund
[Submitter's First Name]
Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Unify the PHY synchronization field by removing figure 25. Define a frame
length code 32= no framing. Remove reference to PHY type=0,1 from figure 24.
Rename the field frame number to Timestamp.
[Reason for Edit]
There is no reason to have two different messages.
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Eklund
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Carl
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E/T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove paragraph starting "Three Pairs ...."
[Reason for Edit]
There is no requirement to pair the data grants IEs. Also short and long
data bursts are no longer accurate descriptions.
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Eklund
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Carl
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E/T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change A four bit Downlink ...(DIUC) to A four-bit Uplink ..UIUC. Also
chance IUC to UIUC on page 82 line 1.
Furthermore:
Change the sentence 'The offset shall be....' to "The offset shall be the
time offset expressed as a number of minislots measured from the time
instant indicated in the previous IE. The time instants indicated by the
offsets are the transmission times of the first symbol of the burst
including preamble."
[Reason for Edit]
Earlier wording was ambiguous.
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Eklund
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Carl
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T/G/E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The description of the DL_MAP message is incomplete.
Remove text on p.77 l.3 'relative to the PHY mode. The .... field'
Unify PHY sync field (see separate comment)
Move table 11 to its right place. Fix figure 26.
Add parameters
Base station ID
This is a 64 bit number identifying the BS. The BS ID may be programmable.
DL_MAP IEs
Only present for PHY types 0 and 1. The IEs indicate the boudaries of the
different burst types.
Also give explanations to the DIUC e.g. Gap a gap in the DL data
transmission. The BS may send fill bytes during Gaps.
Remove paragraph on page 79 starting 'The CID...'
[Reason for Edit]
Make the section readable. Have a single DL_MAP message format for all PHY
modes. Explain parameters.
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add to description of Requested burst type and ranging anomalies: Must not
be included in the initial ranging request transmitted by the SS when
attempting to join the network.
Add to sentence in SS MAC address: A required parameter when the CID in the
message header is the initialization CID.
[Reason for Edit]
Initial ranging bursts should be of well known length and as short as
possible.
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Eklund
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Carl
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E/T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Utterly remove all text on page 88 including figures.
[Reason for Edit]
Transmit equalizer previously killed.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
replace s by bytes
[Reason for Edit]
wonders of word processing
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Eklund
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Carl
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete text to line 48. Correct field in table on page 108 to read 3-255 .
[Reason for Edit]
The information is contained in 2.5.20.1
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T/G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
PS should be defined elsewhere, also section is very PHY specific (including
figures).
Figure 52 is wrong.
Delete from p.114 l.61- p115.15
[Reason for Edit]
Removal of PHY dependency. The talk about MAC control should have been
removed based on decision in last meeting.
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E/T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove paragraph starting Each...
Also change Physical to Uplink on line 54
[Reason for Edit]
Incorrect fluff. Redundant.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Explanation of empty IE is missing.
Empty IE
The Empty IE specifies pauses in uplink transmissions. An SS must not
transmit during an empty IE.
[Reason for Edit]
Consistency
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E/G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Remove the word typically.
Also reword paragraph to suit better in a standards document.
[Reason for Edit]
We need clear definitition of the number of transmit opportunities in an
interval.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
s should be bytes
[Reason for Edit]
word processor features...