This is a list of editorial errors in IEEE P802.16/D5.
| First Name | Last Name | Starting Page Number | Starting Line Number | Reason | Change |
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| Roger | Marks | The terms "Security Sublayer" and "Privacy Sublayer" are used interchangeably; the latter is defined by Clause 7, but the former is never defined. | Change "Security Sublayer" to "Privacy Sublayer" on Page 26, Line 27; Page 27, Lines 19 and 20; and Page 199, Lines 18. | ||
| Roger | Marks | Multiple references to "parameter file" should refer instead to "Configuration File" of Clause 9. | Page 295, Line 11: Rename Subclause 9.2 to "SS Configuration File" * Page 295, Line 16: change "in a file" to "in the SS Configuration File" * Page 77, Line 38: change "by a downloaded parameter file" to "by the downloaded SS Configuration File" * Page 77, Line 40: change "by a downloaded parameter file" to "by the downloaded SS Configuration File" * Page 144, Line 31: change "the parameter file" to "the SS Configuration File" * Page 206, Line 56: change "parameter file" to "SS Configuration File" * Page 207, Line 54: change "parameter file" to "SS Configuration File" * Page 213, Line 3: change "in TFTP downloaded parameter file " to "in the TFTP-downloaded SS Configuration File" * Page 213, Line 16: change "parameter file " to "SS Configuration File" |
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| Roger | Marks | "802.1P" should be "802.1p"; but this was an amendment to 802.1D and is incorporated in 802.1D-1998. | Change "802.1P" to "802.1D" globally, and add a normative reference: Add reference: IEEE Std 802.1D-1998, IEEE Standard for Information technology—Telecommunications and information exchange between systems—Local and metropolitan area networks—Common specifications— Part 3: Media Access Control (MAC) Bridges. |
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| Roger | Marks | 3 | 25 | Editorial improvement needed. | change "development" to "finalization" |
| Roger | Marks | 3 | 33-41 | Improved accuracy and completeness needed. | change paragraph to: Glen Sater served as editor in readying the document for Working Group Letter Ballot, with contributions by Jeffrey Foerster. Earlier, Brian Petry and James Mollenauer served as editors. For a period, Jung Yee served as MAC Chair and John Liebetreu as PHY Vice Chair. Brian Petry served as editor of the Functional Requirements Document on which this standard was developed; George Fishel chaired the development of that document. Juan Carlos Zúñiga, Phil Guillemette, Ron Meyer, and Nico van Waes served as secretaries. |
| Roger | Marks | 4 | 15 | Spelling error. | Correct first name of "Kostas" to "Demosthenes" |
| Roger | Marks | 4 | 18 | David Trinkwon's name should be removed, at his request. | Delete "David Trinkwon" from list. |
| Roger | Marks | 4 | 44 | Spelling error. | Change "Nunez" to "Núñez" |
| Roger | Marks | 4 | 45 | Names missing. | add the following names (alphabetically): Babis Kalatzis, Subbu Ponnuswamy, Lei Wang |
| Roger | Marks | 4 | 49 | Spelling error. | Change "abstaning" to "abstention" |
| Stanley | Wang | 4 | 29-37 | The last nine names on the list are duplicates. | Remove the last nine names in the third column (however, use the second instance, instead of the first, of "Zuniga" since it has the correct accents). |
| Roger | Marks | 25 | 60 | Section 1.2.2 is obsolete, since P802.16b is being withdrawn and merged into P802.16.a | Change title of 1.2.2 to "2-11 GHz" and contents of 1.2.2 "This work is in development under IEEE Standards Association Project P802.16a." |
| Roger | Marks | 26 | 1 | Section 1.2.3 is obsolete, since P802.16b is being withdrawn and merged into P802.16.a | Delete 1.2.3 |
| Roger | Marks | 31 | 21 | The definition of "protocol data unit" is out of alphabetical order. | Move the definition (along with Figure 2) down by two entries. |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 34 | 55 | PCI is generally known as "Peripheral Component Interconnect", and acronym is not used in document. | Delete definition of "PCI". |
| 42 | 43 | Change: "management operations [configuration file, registration, and Simple Network Managment Protocol (SNMP)]" to simply: "network management operations" |
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| Roger | Marks | 56 | 55 | Stylistic inconsistency in " - request" (see, for example, Lined 37). | Change "request" to "Request" and lengthen hyphen into a dash. |
| Roger | Marks | 64 | 18 | There is a stray half tick-mark near the left of the figure. | Delete the mark. |
| Carl | Eklund | 69 | 56 | "Message type" is incorrect | "Message type" to "Management Message Type" |
| Stanley | Wang | 71 | 8-17 | Editor erred in implementing resolution to Comment 32 (as approved in recirculation). The commment said "On page 74, lines 15 & 17, change the rows of the table to read "reserved for future use." Editor erroneously applied the comment to rows 15 and 17 of the table, instead of lines 15 & 17 of the page. | On page 71, line 15 (Row 19) & and line 17 (Row 20), delete second and fourth column entry and change third column to "reserved for future use." Change page 71, line 8 to: 15 | DSC-RSP | Dynamic Service Change Response | Primary Management Change page 71, line 11 to: 17 | DSD-REQ | Dynamic Service Deletion Request | Primary Management |
| Roger | Marks | 71 | 35-39 | The three rows labeled 30, 31, and 32 are in a larger font size than the other rows. | Reduce the fonts size to 9 point. |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 100 | 1 | Table 47 is a duplicate of Table 46. | In Line 1 (in the title of Table 47), change "Request (DBPC-REQ)" to "Response (DBPC-RSP)". In Line 6, change "DBPC-REQ_Message_Format" to "DBPC-RSP_Message_Format". In Line 8, change "23" to "24". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 105 | 47 | Incorrect management message type number for TFTP-RSP message (inconsistent with Table 13). | Replace "= 31" with "= 32". |
| Roger | Marks | 144 | 41 | 6.2.10 is properly a sub-heading of 6.2.9 (it is (j) on p. 128). | Renumber 6.2.10 as 6.2.9.13. |
| Roger | Marks | 154 | 26 | RF MAC is not the proper term used elsewhere in the document. | Change "RF MAC" to "MAC". |
| Stanley | Wang | 159 | 35-41 | On Page 159 Line 35, "SS" should be "BS" (since the SS passes messages to the BS, not to itself). On Page 159 Line 41, "BS" should be "SS" (since the BS passes messages to the SS, not to itself). (Both mistakes are traceable to an earlier editing error in which the wrong "BS" was changed to "SS".) | On Page 159 Line 35, change "SS" to "BS"; on Page 159 Line 41, change "BS" to "SS". |
| Roger | Marks | 160 | 45 | Missing space | Add space after "system." |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 8 | DSA-Request is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Request" to "DSA-REQ". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 16 | RSX-RVD is an obvious typo; there is no such entity. | Correct "RSX-RVD" to "DSX-RVD". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 20 | DSA-Response is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Response" to "DSA-RSP". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 23 | DSA-Ack is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Ack" to "DSA-ACK". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 48 | DSA-Request is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Request" to "DSA-REQ". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 51 | DSA-Response is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Response" to "DSA-RSP". |
| Roger | Marks | 161 | 58 | DSA-Ack is stylistically inconsistent. | Change "DSA-Ack" to "DSA-ACK". |
| Stanley | Wang | 168 | 12 | DSA-RSP Pending self-loop is missing the case of DSX-RVD. | Add "(DSX-RVD /)" to the end of the list of possible transitions for the self-loop of state "DSA-RSP Pending". {For example, see Fig. 69 on Page 166} |
| Stanley | Wang | 168 | 13 | Figure erroneously says "DSA-RSP Pending", even though, as shown in the caption, the figure refers to DSC. | Correct "DSA-RSP Pending" to "DSC-RSP Pending". |
| Stanley | Wang | 168 | 15 | Stray characters "SS" on right side of figure, below "[SS only]". | Delete "SS" below "[SS only]". |
| Stanley | Wang | 170 | 12 | The self-loopback for the state "DSD-RSP Pending" is missing. This is obvious from the fact that the loopback label in present in the figure. | Add a self-loopback for the state "DSD-RSP Pending". (See Figure 69 on Page 166 for a drawing example.) |
| Stanley | Wang | 172 | 12 | SA_REQ is an obvious typo; there is no such entity. | Correct "SA_REQ" to "DSA-REQ". |
| Stanley | Wang | 182 | 59 | DSC_RVD is an obvious typo; there is no such entity. | Correct "DSC_RVD" to "DSX-RVD". |
| Roger | Marks | 183 | 15 | DSC_RVD is an obvious typo; there is no such entity. | Correct "DSC_RVD" to "DSX-RVD". |
| Carl | Eklund | 206 | 44 | RF MAC is not the proper term used elsewhere in the document. | Change "RF MAC" to "MAC". |
| Stanley | Wang | 227 | 31 | The phrase "all three of" is inappropriate since there are now only two certificate types (in accordance with Comment #70 of the IEEE-SA Sponsor Ballot, which eliminated the root CA). | Change "for all three of" to "for both of the". |
| Stanley | Wang | 301 | 18 | Table 118 lists two timers named "T15". These require different names. The SS T15 should be renumbered as T16. {Note that the BS T15 is mentioned only in Fig. 61.} | Change "T15" to "T16" on Page 301, Line 18 and on Page 127, Line 24. |
| Stanley | Wang | 302 | 13 | Authorization Lifetime was renamed to "AK Lifetime" (see Page 301 Line 34, for example). | Change "Authorization Lifetime" to "AK Lifetime". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 314 | 65 | Incorrect error code range. | Delete "(1-8)". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 315 | 53 | Grammatical error in last sentence. | Replace "then" with "them". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 316 | 28 | Duplicate value string. | Replace "CA" with "SS". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 324 | 53 | For consistency with nearby sections and section title, add "PHY". | Replace "GHz SS" with "GHz PHY SS". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 324 | 64 | Incorrect section number. | SBC-RSP is found in section 6.2.2.3.24, not 6.2.2.3.23. |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 325 | 40 | For consistency with nearby sections and section title, add "PHY". | Replace "GHz SS" with "GHz PHY SS". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 327 | 12 | Add bit 2 to range of reserved values. | Replace "#3-7" with "#2-7". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 328 | 44 | The values indicate a length of 1, not 2; also, the italics are inappropriate. | Change "2" in Length column to non-italic "1". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 328 | 46-47 | Duplicate bit values: Bit 2 is defined twice, and 6 not at all. | In the "Value" column, increase each bit number by 1, starting with the second incidence of "2" and going through 5. Change "9-255" to "10-15". |
| Stanley | Wang | 336 | 21 | Per 11.4.8.10 (page 335), TLV 24.43 is called "Vendor Specific QoS Parameters" | Change Footnote a to: 'The specific implementation-dependent scheduling service type could be defined in a message of Type 24.43 ("Vendor Specific QoS Parameters").' |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 336 | 39-40 | Confusing definition for bit 1. If bit 1 is reserved, the rest of the definition should be deleted. | Delete "The service flow shall not use Priority Request multicast opportunities." Italicize "reserved". |
| Stanley | Wang | 338 | 43 | From its values it is obvious that the "Length" field should be 1 (byte) instead of 2. | Change the "Length" field to 1. |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 338 | 45-46 | Duplicate bit values: Bit 2 is defined twice. | In the "Value" column, increase each bit number by 1, starting with the second incidence of "2". Change "9-255" to "10-255". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 339 | 27 | Grammatical error in second sentence of section 11.4.9.3. | Change "prefixed" to "prefixed to". |
| Stanley | Wang | 339 | 28 | Type values for 802.3 should be [24/25].102 (per 11.4.9.2). | Change "99.1" to "[24/25].102". At end of sentence, change "11.4.9" to "11.4.9.2" |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 341 | 2 | Grammatical error in second sentence. | Replace "there" with "the". Also, in line 3, change "e.g." to "; e.g.," |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 341 | 22 | Grammatical error in second sentence. | Replace "Set is only applies" with "Set applies only". Also, change "NOT" to lower case. |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 342 | 7 | Invalid range of values for 1 byte field. | Replace "1-65535" with "0-255". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 342 | 56 | Missing italics. | Add italics to "n" in "n*32". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 345 | 19 | Grammatical error in first sentence. | Replace "specify" with "specifies". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 345 | 21 | Missing period. | Add period after "irrelevant". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 350 | 31,46 | Sections 11.4.9.4.2 and 11.4.9.4.3 define the same Type value ([24/25].99); the sub-type value is missing. | In Line 31, change "[24/25].99" to "[24/25].99.1". In Line 46, change "[24/25].99" to "[24/25].99.2". |
| Lawrence | Stefani | 351 | 61 | Variable m not defined. | Replace "m" with "n". |
| Roger | Marks | 352 | 48 | Grammar error. | Change "which lists set" to "that list sets" |