[802SEC] Small Edits in Proposed P&P Changes

["Shellhammer, Stephen J" <stephen.j.shellhammer@INTEL.COM>]

IEEE 802 SEC,

 

            The 802.19 TAG reviewed the changes in the proposed P&P for coexistence that were made at the Sunday night rules meeting.  In reviewing the changes the TAG discovered a few small edits that were required.  The revised text is attached.

 

            The first change was a correction because when writing a PAR and 5C the working group indicates that they will produce a CA document in the 5C, however, the original text said PAR and 5C.  This is not precisely correct since we did not make any changes to the PAR form (which of course we cannot change).  Here is the before and after text showing the two words that were deleted.

 

Before

If indicated in the PAR and five criteria, the wireless working group shall produce a coexistence assurance (CA) document

 

After

If indicated in the PAR and five criteria, the wireless working group shall produce a coexistence assurance (CA) document

 

 

            In making edits on Sunday night we produced a grammatically incorrect sentence.  Below is the correction.

 

Before

The 802.19 TAG shall have one vote in working group letter and that include CA documents

 

After

The 802.19 TAG shall have one vote in working group letter and ballots that include CA documents.

 

Regards,

Steve

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Steve Shellhammer

Intel Corporation

(858) 391-4570

 

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