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Dear EC members, The last e-mail was the 'official' ballot which was needed to open the topic for discussion. Attached are my current recommended changes which are much more extensive. If any of you have any editorial issues you'd like to resolve, please send them to me (with recommended textual changes). There are additional changes I want to make, but I want to see if anyone objects to my positions first. Here is a short list of issues not yet addressed for comment: 1) There are a large number of occurrences of 'WG or TAG' and 'WG/TAG' in the text. I feel this is cumbersome and unnecessary. The original intent of the P&P TAG text was that TAG procedures are identical to WG procedures unless explicitly identified otherwise. I plan to replace most occurrences of the phrases above with 'WG' unless I hear objections to this approach. 2) There are many occurrences of 'Plenary' as a proper noun (capitalized). 'Interim' is almost never capitalized. I plan to eliminate most occurrences of the capitalization of 'plenary'. From a pure grammar perspective I think it can go either way. Let me know if you object. 3) In clause 17.1 (line 17) there is reference to a 'working guide' that I believe no longer exists. I plan to change the reference to a 'web page' unless people object. Regards to all, Mat Matthew Sherman, Ph.D. Senior Member Technical Staff BAE SYSTEMS, CNIR Office: +1 973.633.6344 email: email@example.com -----Original Message----- From: Sherman, Matthew J. (US SSA) Sent: Monday, January 02, 2006 11:26 PM To: STDS-802-SEC@listserv.ieee.org Subject: [802SEC] +++ LMSC P&P Revision Ballot +++ Editorial Dear EC members, Attached you will find the text for an LMSC P&P revision ballot titled 'Editorial'. This ballot was approved at the Friday November 18, 2005 EC meeting. The text is identical to that presented at the meeting. The purpose and rationale for the ballot are as given in the attached ballot document. Ballot Duration: 1/2/2006 - 2/2/2006 @ 11:59 PM EST WG/TAG chairs, please distribute this P&P revision ballot to your groups, and invite them to comment through you. Please direct any comments on this revision to the reflector for collection. Note that I intend to hold a comment resolution telecon for this ballot on 2/23/06 @ 12 PM EST. Further details will follow. Thanks & Regards, Mat Matthew Sherman, Ph.D. Senior Member Technical Staff BAE SYSTEMS, CNIR Office: +1 973.633.6344 email: firstname.lastname@example.org ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv. ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.
060101 Editiorial revisions from LMSC_P&P_November_2005_r051204_revs_off.pdf