Hi James,
Just an update on your comments - I contacted the IEEE PR folk about the need for a full stop after 'industrial automation and automotive' at the top of the first page and have been informed it is not needed as it is a subheadline. I was also informed that the use of the "Fla." as the abbreviation for Florida is to comply with Associated Press style, which they adhere to in most instances in the press releases.
Best regards,
David
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From: Law, David
Sent: 06 February 2013 11:36
To: IEEE 802 SEC <stds-802-sec@ieee.org>
Subject: RE: [802SEC] +++ 10-day EC Email Ballot +++ IEEE 802.3 Distinguished Minimum Latency Traffic in a Converged Traffic Environment Study Group
Hi James,
Thanks for your comments - I'll check with the PR folk in respect to your fist comment - the other two I have implemented.
Best regards,
David
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From: James Gilb [mailto:jpgilb@gmail.com] On Behalf Of James P. K. Gilb
Sent: 06 February 2013 00:56
To: Law, David
Cc: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [802SEC] +++ 10-day EC Email Ballot +++ IEEE 802.3 Distinguished Minimum Latency Traffic in a Converged Traffic Environment Study Group
David
I vote approve and provide the following editorial suggestions, to be
made at your discretion:
Top of first page: Should there be a period after "industrial automation
and automotive"?
Bottom of the first page, it would be Orlando, Florida or Orlando, FL,
but not Orlando, Fla
Second page, first paragraph, "for global expertise to come together in
collaboration", "experts" can come together and collaborate, but I don't
think that "expertise" can.
IMNSHO
James Gilb
On 01/29/2013 03:58 PM, Law, David wrote:
Dear EC members,
Based on the draft IEEE 802.3 Distinguished Minimum Latency Traffic in a Converged Traffic Environment Study Group Ad Hoc press release I circulated a couple of weeks ago, please find attached an updated release which I'm now seeking EC approval for. I've also attached a changed bar version for your reference.
Paul has delegated the conduct of the EC electronic ballot on the following motion to me. To ensure this release is issued as soon as practical I am announcing the possibility of an 'early close' to this ballot (see below).
Best regards,
David
Motion
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The EC supports the IEEE 802.3 Distinguished Minimum Latency Traffic in a Converged Traffic Environment Study Group press release, with editorial changes as deemed necessary.
Move: David Law
Second: John D'Ambrosia
Start of ballot: Wednesday 30th January
Close of ballot: Friday 8th February, 11:59PM AOE
Early close: As required in subclause 4.1.2.2 'Electronic Balloting' of the IEEE project 802 LAN/MAN Standards Committee (LMSC) Operations Manual, this is notice that, to ensure the release is provided in a timely manner, this ballot may close early once sufficient responses are received to clearly decide a matter.
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