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Re: [802SEC] Updated P802.1Qcx PAR & CSD with 802.1 comment responses



Colleagues,

Rebuttal comments on the PAR for P802.1Qcx - Amendment: YANG Data Model for Connectivity Fault Management were received from 802.11.

While we are not aware of a rule describing the process for rebuttal comments, 802.1 WG has prepared additional responses to the comments in this document:

http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/admin-farkas-11-rebuttal-responses-0717-v2.pdf

The PAR has been updated:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cx-draft-PAR-0517-v03.pdf

The CSD is unchanged:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cx-draft-CSD-0517-v02.pdf

Cheers,

Glenn.

 

 

From: Jon Rosdahl [mailto:jrosdahl@ieee.org]
Sent: Thursday, July 13, 2017 6:50 AM
To: Glenn Parsons <glenn.parsons@ericsson.com>
Cc: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [802SEC] Updated P802.1Qcx PAR & CSD with 802.1 comment responses

 

The 802.11 PAR Review SC has the following rebuttal/follow-up comments for 802.1Qcx:

1.  PAR 5.3

  – “If yes, please explain” – listing the title of another amendment does not seem to “explain”.

How is the proposed standard dependent on IEEE P802.1Q-Rev and IEEE P802.1Qcp?

What is the schedule impact due to the dependency on IEEE P802.1Q-Rev and IEEE P802.1Qcp?

2. PAR – 6.1b – “The YANG Data Model will be assigned a URN based on the RA URN tutorial and IEEE Std 802d.”

a)The acronyms need to be expanded “URN”, “RA”

b)The RA URN tutorial should include a reference.

c)IEEE Std 802d should be fully cited in 8.1

Respectfully submitted:

Jon

802.11 PAR Review SC Chair


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On Wed, Jul 12, 2017 at 9:00 AM, Glenn Parsons <glenn.parsons@ericsson.com> wrote:

Colleagues,

 

Comments on the PAR for P802.1Qcx - Amendment: YANG Data Model for Connectivity Fault Management were received from 802.11 and 802.3.

 

The responses to the comment are here:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cx-PAR-CSD-comments-0717-v01.pdf

 

The PAR has been updated:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cx-draft-PAR-0517-v02.pdf

 

The CSD has been updated:

http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cx-draft-CSD-0517-v02.pdf

Cheers,

Glenn.

 

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