Re: [STDS-802-11-EDITORS] My findings on the 11bd MDR assignment (except

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Attached is a file with my findings. I did take a quick look at clause 6 and added 2 findings there.

Regards,

Carol

From: *** IEEE stds-802-11-editors List *** <STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> on behalf of Stacey, Robert <robert.stacey@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Monday, January 10, 2022 at 11:53 AM
To: STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-EDITORS] My findings on the 11bd MDR assignment (except clause 6)

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Thank you, Edward.

Anybody want to review Clause 6?

-Robert

From: Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Sunday, January 9, 2022 5:31 AM
To: Stacey, Robert <robert.stacey@xxxxxxxxx>
Cc: STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: My findings on the 11bd MDR assignment (except clause 6)

Hello Robert,

Enclosed please find my findings on the following sections.

2.1.5: Information Elements/Subelements
2.1.6: Style Guide 2.5 – Removal of functions and features
2.1.7: Style Guide 2.6 – Capitalization
2.1.8: Style Guide 2.7 – Terminology: frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MPDU
2.1.10: Style Guide 2.9 – Numbers
2.1.11: Style Guide 2.10 – Maths operators and relations
2.1.12: Style Guide 2.11 – Hyphenation
2.1.17: Style Guide 2.16 – Abbreviations
2.1.19.7: Annex B – PICS

Please kindly ask another volunteer to review the following section:

2.1.19.4: SAP interfaces (Clause 6)

Thanks and Regards,
Edward

On Tue, Jan 4, 2022 at 12:19 PM Stacey, Robert <robert.stacey@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

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Hello All,

The volunteers I saw are as follows:

Robert Stacey – I will do the ANA checks and initiate the MEC

Peter Ecclesine

Yujin Noh – Technical editor – nothing to do in the review, but will be responsible for acting on the corrections

Emily Qi

Edward Au

Yongho Seok – MIB check and compile

Joseph Levy

Carol Ansley

I’ve uploaded the first copy of the report here: https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/22/11-22-0021-00-0000-tgbd-mdr-report.docx

This has the initial assignments. Take a look and if you want something different we can negotiate 😲

-=Robert

From: Stacey, Robert
Sent: Sunday, December 26, 2021 11:16 AM
To: STDS-802-11-EDITORS@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: 11bd MDR volunteers

Hello All,

I am preparing the assignments for the 11bd/D3.0 MDR. If you are interested in volunteering please let me know.

From Peter’s editor meeting report from November I have:

Robert Stacey,

Peter Ecclesine

Emily Qi

To which I would add

Yujin Noh (editor)

Yongho Seok (MIB compile)

Any others?

-Robert

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