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Hello, I have the following comments on this: - "is present in the Beacon frames". What Beacon frames? This subclause has hitherto been talking about FD frames. I suggest adding "transmitted in the BSS" at the end of the sentence. - "the BSS operating channel width of the transmitting AP". The BSS operating channel width is, well, the BSS operating channel width. It does not belong to the AP (although it is true I think that the AP's operating width is also the BSS's operating width). I suggest deleting "of the transmitting AP". - "transmitting a Beacon frame at TBTT". This gives the impression an extra Beacon frame is transmitted instead of the Probe Response frames. Furthermore, the Beacon is not necessarily transmitted at TBTT (TBTT = *target* Beacon transmission time). I suggest rewording as "by letting the next Beacon frame be the response to the Probe Request frame(s)". Regards, Mark -- Mark RISON, Standards Architect, WLAN English/Esperanto/Français Samsung Cambridge Solution Centre Tel: +44 1223 434600 Innovation Park, Cambridge CB4 0DS Fax: +44 1223 434601 ROYAUME UNI WWW: http://www.samsung.com/uk From: *** 802.11 TGai - Fast Initial Link Set-Up *** [mailto:STDS-802-11-TGAI@xxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Wang, Xiaofei (Clement) Dear all, I have uploaded a document with four additional editorial changes (indicated by both redlined text and
yellow highlight) for the text proposed in 14/1270r0. https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/14/11-14-1287-00-00ai-lb201-editorial-changes.docx Best regards, Xiaofei Clement Wang 631-622-4028 _______________________________________________________________________________
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