Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAI] D4.4 and Editor Report in response to MDR on servers

[Lee Armstrong <lra@xxxxxxxx>]

No, this week's resolutions are not included. Also not included are 
the numbering and thus cross-references. Managed to get those done 
this morning as part of getting D4.5 started. Will be doing this 
week's changes and what you have identified below over the next few days.


At 01:24 PM 5/14/2015, Hitoshi MORIOKA wrote:
> Hi Lee,
>
> Does D4.4 include changes made in this week?
>
> Anyway, the following issues have to be fixed.
>
> - 11-15/559r4 has not been incorporated. (Motion #268 on Tue)
> - Clause number from 8.4.2.180 to 8.4.2.186 have to be decresed.
> - P19 L60: "AssociationDelayInfoAssociationDelayInfo" -> 
> "AssociationDelayInfo"
> - P52 L18: Has the EID of the FILS Public Key element not assigned?
> - P95 L28: L definition should be after N definition. Because L 
> appears in M and N definition.
> - P111 L43: "association delay info" -> "AssociationDelayInfo" (CID7284)
> - P119 L1: Remove " (double quote at the beginning)
> - P147 L1: "response" -> "Response"
> - P155 L51: "AND AND" -> "AND"
> - P155 L53: Insert <new line> after "M,"
> - P158 L17: Insert "dot11DILSImplemented," after 
> "dot11FILSOmitReplicateProbeResponses,"
> - Annex C: Insert <new line> after each period in DESCRIPTION of the 
> following variables. (MDR)
>   = dot11FILSActivated
>   = dot11FILSFDFrameBeaconMinimumInterval
>   = dot11FILSBeaconResponseWindow
>   = dot11FILSOmitReplicateProbeResponses
>   = dot11DILSImplemented
>   = dot11FILSProbeDelay
>   = dot11HLPWaitTime
>
> regards,
>
> On 2015/05/15 1:38, Marc Emmelmann wrote:
> > Dear all:
> >
> > The Editor Report in response to the MDR is on mentor:
> >
> > https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/15/11-15-0248-04-0000-p802-11ai-mdr-report.docx
> >
> > Please find as well D4.4 of the TGai draft in the members' area. 
> > The draft includes all approved changes
> > except the ones approved in yesterday's sessions.
> >
> > As usual, Lee asks all TGai members to review the draft to apply 
> > the 4-eyes principle assuring that approved submissions are correctly
> > incorporated.
> >
> > Best,
> >
> > Marc
> >
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