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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAQ] comments and suggested editorial changes on 11-17/521r4



 

  Hi Yunsong,

 

 Thank you for your comments. Your second comment is a great one and I will update the draft. But

I would like to discuss your first and third comments. They are basically the same comment, just moving

the text about transactional exchanges up into the description of the period when one changes MAC

addresses. My view is that the first paragraph is introducing the concept—periodically change the MAC

address if this variable is true. Once the concept is introduced an exception is made: don't do this during

transactional exchanges. If the exception is included in the general introductory statement I think it takes

away from the flow and understanding of the concept. It makes the sentence more complex.

 

  My feeling is I would like to respectfully decline those two comments (accepting the other one) but I

would like to know how strongly you feel about them.

 

  Please let me know, I'm updating the submission.

 

  regards,

 

  Dan.

 

On 4/18/17, 4:50 PM, "Yangyunsong" <yangyunsong@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

 

Sorry for sending this to the WG e-mail list. This was meant for TGaq only.

 

Best regards,

Yunsong Yang

Huawei Device USA Inc.

10180 Telesis Court, STE 165

San Diego, CA 92121

Phone: +1-858-754-3638

 

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Hi Dan,

Thank you for updating the text. I would like to suggest a few editorial changes to clause 12.2.10, as attached.

 

Thanks,

Yunsong Yang

Huawei Device USA Inc.

10180 Telesis Court, STE 165

San Diego, CA 92121

Phone: +1-858-754-3638

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