Hello Robert,
Thank you for your efforts making all the changes in D0.5.
I also noticed that some CRs are missed.
1.
P210L41,
represents
the cyclic shift for the transmitter chain whose values are TBD. The proposed change is “whose values are defined in 26.3.10.2.12 (Cyclic shift for pre-HE modulated fields)”.
2.
P211L6, For HE modulated fields,
represents
the cyclic shift per space-time stream, whose value is defined in Table 25-xx (Cyclic shift values for the HE modulated fields of a PPDU). The proposed change is “whose value is defined in 26.3.10.2.2 (Cyclic shift for HE modulated fields)”.
3.
P213L19 (CR #2531), Nsts,total is not changed to Nsts in equation 26-9, P214L17, TGI,Legacypreamble is not changed to TGI,L-LTF in equation 26-11. P216L4, Nsts,total is not changed to Nsts in equation
26-14. Equation 26-18 is wrong, different than the one proposed in CR #2531. It is in document 802.11-16/ 1137r4.
4.
In Table 26-12 (see document 802.11-16/1135r2).
a.
P204L10 (CR #2522), remove at r-th RU, and NCBPS = NCBPS, 0,0 change to NCBPS = NCBPS, 0
b.
P204L16, “For the Data field, NCBPSS,r,u equals the number of coded bits per symbol per spatial stream at r-th RU for user
u “, change to “NCBPSS,u equals the number of coded bits per symbol per spatial stream for user u, u = 0, ..., Nuser_total –1.” For an HE SU PPDU, NCBPSS = NCBPSS,0.
c.
P204L27 “Number of coded bits per subcarrier per spatial stream at r-th RU for user u, u = 0, ..., Nuser,total – 1.(#2522)
For an HE SU PPDU, NBPSCS = NBPSCS,0,0.” Change to “Number of coded bits per subcarrier per spatial stream for user u, u = 0, ..., Nuser,total – 1.(#2522) For an HE SU PPDU, NBPSCS = NBPSCS,0. “
5.
P208L7(CR#286), Equation 26-4, m is summed from 1 to Nsts,r,u instead of Nsts,r,u-1. (see document 802.11-16/1136r5).
6.
P209L18(CR#286), Equation 26-6 beta,r definition is not corrected as shown in document 802.11-16/1136r5.
I really appreciate if you can correct those misses in the next version.
Thanks a lot
Yan
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On Behalf Of Sung Eun Lee
Sent: Wednesday, October 05, 2016 2:04 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGAX@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAX] Comment resolution status
Hello Robert,
First of all, thank you very much for making D0.5 available.
I guess it is a tremendous amount of effort to capture all motions at once.
It seems some of the proposed changes for passed motions in September are missed in D0.5 (mostly Editorial part), so I would appreciate if you could consider to capture the following comments for the next revision.
I also put the corresponding Motion and contribution number for each comment.
|
Comment for changes
|
Clause |
Page |
Line |
Contribution |
Motion Number |
|
Change GI2 to GI, i.e., T_GI |
26.3.9 |
209 |
54 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
Remove the number at the end T_GI,HE-LTF1, i.e., T_GI,HE-LTF |
26.3.9 |
210 |
10 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
Remove the number at the end T_GI,HE-LTF2, i.e., T_GI,HE-LTF |
26.3.9 |
210 |
12 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
Remove the number at the end T_GI,HE-LTF4, i.e., T_GI,HE-LTF |
26.3.9 |
210 |
14 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
In Table 26-16, the number of bits for B21-B22 is 2 not 3 |
26.3.10.7.2 |
218 |
26 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
Please update the text HE-SIG-A2 to "HE-SIG-A2 for HE_SU PPDU or HE-SIG-A3 for HE_EXT_SU PPDU" |
26.3.10.7.2 |
221 |
25 |
11-16/1179r4 |
PHY #172 |
|
beta_r^Field description in D0.5 is different from 16/1136r5 (missing Trigger-based PPDU part). In addition, r index in the summation should be from 0 to N_RU-1
|
26.3.9 |
209 |
24 |
11-16/1136r5 |
CR #80 |
|
We introduce the new parameter T_GI,L-LTF in PHY #172 (1179r4), and it is reflected in CR #81 as well. Please change the parameter name T_GI,LegacyPreamble to T_GI,L-LTF as in 16/1137r4. |
26.3.10.4 |
214 |
22 |
11-16/1137r4 |
CR #81 |
|
alpha_r exists in (26-115) which is different from 16/1138r4. Since no normalization factor for all other RUs is applied, numerator would be 1, so please replace alpha_r to 1 in Eq (26-115) |
26.3.11.14 |
280 |
17 |
11-16/1138r4 |
CR #82 |
Thank you.
Sungeun
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On Behalf Of Stacey, Robert
Sent: Tuesday, October 04, 2016 2:06 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGAX@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAX] Comment resolution status
Thanks Bin,
I guess I missed that – I assumed only the titles were updated. I’ll add them and have them in the next revision – probably D1.0 coming out of November.
-Robert
From: Tian, Bin [mailto:btian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Tuesday, October 04, 2016 10:57 AM
To: Stacey, Robert <robert.stacey@xxxxxxxxx>;
STDS-802-11-TGAX@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: Comment resolution status
Hi Robert
Thank you for preparing D0.5.
The tables in 26.5 (MCS and parameters) are still not up-to-date. The contribution 11-16/736r0 which was passed motion in May have all the new tables. Can you add them to the next version of draft?
Thanks
Bin
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On Behalf Of Stacey, Robert
Sent: Friday, September 30, 2016 1:37 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGAX@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGAX] Comment resolution status
Hello All,
The latest comment resolution spreadsheet is available here:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/16/11-16-0535-08-00ax-comments-on-tgax-d0-1.xlsx
This includes all the resolutions adopted to date as well as the editing status through D0.5. The comment resolution status is summarized below and D0.5 will be available early next week.
Regards,
-Robert
|
Count of CID |
Column Labels |
|||||
|
Owning Ad-hoc |
Unassigned |
Assigned |
Resolution Drafted |
Approved |
Duplicate |
Grand Total |
|
EDITOR |
20 |
147 |
668 |
1575 |
160 |
2570 |
|
Edited in D0.3 |
|
|
2 |
400 |
|
402 |
|
Edited in D0.4 |
|
|
|
13 |
|
13 |
|
Edited in D0.5 |
|
|
3 |
670 |
|
673 |
|
Editorials |
|
126 |
26 |
|
2 |
154 |
|
Editorials in D0.2 |
|
|
636 |
2 |
153 |
791 |
|
Need Proposal |
8 |
21 |
|
|
|
29 |
|
No change to draft |
|
|
1 |
321 |
4 |
326 |
|
Technical in D0.2 |
|
|
|
169 |
1 |
170 |
|
(blank) |
12 |
|
|
|
|
12 |
|
MAC |
8 |
189 |
|
1 |
|
198 |
|
A-MPDU |
|
5 |
|
|
|
5 |
|
Annexes |
5 |
4 |
|
|
|
9 |
|
Block Ack |
|
35 |
|
1 |
|
36 |
|
Clause 6 & 8 |
|
15 |
|
|
|
15 |
|
Fragmentation |
|
3 |
|
|
|
3 |
|
HE Capabilities/Operation |
|
2 |
|
|
|
2 |
|
HT Control |
|
22 |
|
|
|
22 |
|
MAC General |
3 |
36 |
|
|
|
39 |
|
Receive operating mode |
|
2 |
|
|
|
2 |
|
Sounding |
|
6 |
|
|
|
6 |
|
Trigger frame format |
|
45 |
|
|
|
45 |
|
TWT |
|
13 |
|
|
|
13 |
|
TX/RXVECTOR |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
MU |
|
86 |
|
|
|
86 |
|
MU operation |
|
63 |
|
|
|
63 |
|
MU-RTS/CTS & NAV |
|
23 |
|
|
|
23 |
|
SR |
|
34 |
1 |
|
|
35 |
|
Spatial Reuse |
|
34 |
1 |
|
|
35 |
|
PHY |
1 |
28 |
|
|
1 |
30 |
|
Annexes |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
Coding |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
Editorials |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
HE-SIG-B |
|
4 |
|
|
|
4 |
|
HE-STF & HE-LTF |
|
2 |
|
|
|
2 |
|
MU-RTS/CTS & NAV |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
Need Proposal |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
OFDMA tone plan |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
PHY Intro |
|
5 |
|
|
|
5 |
|
PHY Transmit spec |
|
3 |
|
|
1 |
4 |
|
Pilot subcarriers |
|
1 |
|
|
|
1 |
|
TX/RXVECTOR |
|
3 |
|
|
|
3 |
|
(blank) |
1 |
4 |
|
|
|
5 |
|
Grand Total |
29 |
484 |
669 |
1576 |
161 |
2919 |
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