Re: [STDS-802-11-TGAX] TGax CRC Teleconference 2020-10-22 and 2020-10-23

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DCN	CID
11-20/1541	25089, 25090, 25126, 25129, 25068

Regarding 25089/25090, I'm not persuaded by:

NOTE—27.3.4 and 27.3.6.10 specify the requirements on each of the other remaining subfields, such that the solicited non-AP STAs each construct a valid HE TB PPDU in response to the Trigger frame.

Neither 27.3.4 nor 27.3.6.10 have any requirements that I can see about

Trigger frame subfields, let alone combinations that yield "valid" HE TB PPDUs.

Am I missing something?

11-20/1647

25107, 25108, 25109, 25110, 25111, 25112, 25113, 25114, 25115, 25116

I think 25108 and 25115 are not ready (hoping for some Menzo/Jouni updates).

Also for 25109, based on the discussion on the wording for 25110/25111,

maybe "Data frames containing dynamic fragments" should be "Data frames that are dynamic fragments"?

Also I think we'd agreed to fix the grammar in "shall support to transmit and receive".

And 25113 had some Nmax editorial tweaks. In fact, maybe none of the updates

we made during the last teleconf are in r1; maybe 1647r2 was meant to be uploaded

but hasn't?

11-20/1658

25071, 25095, and 25096.

For 25071, "NSTS-1, where the NSTS indicates"

should be "N_STS – 1, where N_STS is"

i.e. italic and subscript in NSTS, minus not hyphen, no article, is not indicates.

Also, the change at 440.48 has been missed.

For 25095, there's a "to indicate indicate".

For 25096, " Responding to all Trigger frame variants, including MU-RTS Trigger frames and NFRP Trigger frames, are suspended"

should be "is suspended" (the subject is "Responding").

Thanks,

Mark

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From: *** 802.11 TGax - HEW - High Efficiency WLAN *** <STDS-802-11-TGAX@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Osama AboulMagd
Sent: Tuesday, 20 October 2020 17:51
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Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGAX] TGax CRC Teleconference 2020-10-22 and 2020-10-23

Hello All,

TGax CRC has a conference call scheduled for Thursday October 22 @ 10:00 ET; for 3 hours.

TGax CRC has a conference call scheduled for Friday October 23 @ 10:00 ET; for 2 hours.

I’ve uploaded a draft agenda. It is available at: https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-1552-11-00ax-tgax-crc-teleconference-agendas-october-november-december-2020.pptx .

A list of CIDs ready for motion includes:

DCN	CID
11-20/1541	25089, 25090, 25126, 25129, 25068
11-20/1647	25107, 25108, 25109, 25110, 25111, 25112, 25113, 25114, 25115, 25116
11-20/1658	25071, 25095, and 25096.

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