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Hello Chao-Chun Attached is a list of editorial issues I found, up to page 70, I’ll review the rest tomorrow. Thanks, Assaf
From: *** 802.11 TGaz - NGP - Next Generation Positioning *** <STDS-802-11-TGAZ@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
On Behalf Of Venkatesan, Ganesh CAUTION: This email originated from outside of the organization. Hello Chao Chun: I wanted to speak up in the WLS call today but did not want to extend your allocated time for providing us with an update on the development of D1.0. I wanted to express my
admiration for the work you have put thus far into developing D1.0. It is coming along very nicely despite the numerous last minute adjustments that you need to deal with. Please be aware that some TBD (probably none in the context we are discussing here) are what you could potentially address as an editor. For instance, I may have some TBDs
in Annex-C where the description of each newly added MIB variable is assigned an index. Rather than assigned arbitrary indices based on what I think is the next index, I left it for you to determine what is our base index and incrementally assign indices to
the new MIB variables. Cheers -- ganesh From: *** 802.11 TGaz - NGP - Next Generation Positioning ***
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On Behalf Of Segev, Jonathan Hello Chao Chun and thank you for your work, I reviewed the open TBDs file attached to your original mail, please find my feedback highlighted yellow marked
[JS] . The text in the open TBD is missing submission 11-19-163 by Girish, Nehru and Yongho.
Submission was adopted by the TG: 8.5.1 Motion Move to adopt submission 11-19-163r6, instruct the technical editor to incorporate it in the 802.11az draft amendment text and grant editorial rights to the technical editor. 8.5.2 Mover: Ganesh Venkatesan 8.5.3 Seconder: Assaf Kasher 8.5.4 Results (Y/N/A): 12/0/0; Motion passes. To the best of my understanding/review, this submission closes on the majority of the TBDs in your file with the remaining ones either relate to the value defined
by this submission from another submission adopted during the meeting or an editorial that needs to update. See attachment to this mail. Best Regards, Jonathan
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On Behalf Of Chao-Chun Wang Hi, I have incorporated all the submissions from Jan IEEE meeting into a preliminary draft of az r1.0. I am doing the editorial clean up and will need for your support
to complete it. There are about 20+ TBDs in the submissions that I received for r1.0. Please take a look at the attached word file for details. The attached excel file lists all the submissions. If you are the one submitted the text, please send me your update for the TBDs ASAP. Thanks. Chao-Chun To unsubscribe from the STDS-802-11-TGAZ list, click the following link:
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