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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBC] Doc 11-21/0090



Thanks for this update, Abhi.  I attach my comments.

 

Note I am concerned that change tracking has gone awry (I gave up

trying to find the divergences after a few) and some changes are

no longer shown, which of course is a big problem.  I think some

kind of direct diff with D1.01 is going to be needed, to make sure

nothing gets lost.

 

Thanks,

 

Mark

 

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From: ** STDS-802-11-TGbc -- Enhanced Broadcast Service ** <STDS-802-11-TGBC@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> On Behalf Of Abhishek Patil
Sent: Friday, 22 January 2021 20:45
To: STDS-802-11-TGBC@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBC] Doc 11-21/0090

 

Hi Marc, Mark, Carol, All,

 

I have posted rev 2 of doc 11-21/90 to mentor:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0090-02-00bc-lb252-resolutions-for-cids-assigned-to-abhi-part-2.docx

 

  • The baseline was updated to D1.01 and approved doc 11-21/0064r4
  • The revised version addresses the feedback from Mark and Carol
  • Resolves 10 additional CIDs some of which were affecting previously discussed resolutions

 

Could you please take a look at the doc and let me know if you have any feedback?

 

Regards,
Abhi

 

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From: Marc Emmelmann <marc.emmelmann@xxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, January 18, 2021 4:00 AM
To: Carol Ansley <carol@xxxxxxxxxx>
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Abhi,

 

we have not motioned the resolution so far.  So maybe we can fix this grammar issue before we run the final motion?

 

Marc

 

 

> On 15 Jan 2021, at 21:00, Carol Ansley <carol@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

>

> Page 10 – the Descriptions for ReplayProtection have a grammar problem in both tables.

> “Specifies the time and count of the EBCS UL frame is transmission”

> I’ll let you decide how you want to edit it.

> Regards,

> Carol

> From: Abhishek Patil <appatil@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

> Date: Thursday, January 14, 2021 at 8:14 PM

> To: Marc Emmelmann <marc.emmelmann@xxxxxx>, m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx>, Jouni Malinen <jouni@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Hitoshi MORIOKA <hmorioka@xxxxxxxxxxxx>, Stephen McCann <stephen.mccann@xxxxxxxxxx>, Xiaofei Wang <xiaofei.wang@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, ANTONIO DE LA OLIVA DELGADO <aoliva@xxxxxxxxxx>, bahareh.sadeghi@xxxxxxxxx <bahareh.sadeghi@xxxxxxxxx>, George Cherian <gcherian@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Carol Ansley <carol@xxxxxxxxxx>

> Cc: STDS-802-11-TGBC@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <STDS-802-11-TGBC@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

> Subject: Doc 11-21/0090

>

> Hi Marc, All,

>

> Thank you for the discussion this morning on doc 11-21/0090.

> I have posted a rev 1 with the changes we discussed during the call.

> Could you please take a look and let me know if you have additional feedback?

> Regards,

> Abhi

 


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