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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBD] [STDS-802-11] IEEE P802.11bd D1.2 is available in member area

Hello, Stephan, 


Thanks very much for your careful review. Your findings are recorded and will be fixed in D2.0.


Best Regards,

Bo


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Sender: StephanSand
To: STDS-802-11-TGBD@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx;
Date: 2021/05/29 19:26
Subject: Re:[STDS-802-11-TGBD] [STDS-802-11] IEEE P802.11bd D1.2 is available in member area

Hi Bo,

 

Thanks!


Reviewing 11bd D1.2 with respect to the contributions 11-21/0083r6, 11-21/317r2, and 11-21/321r6, I found the following editorial points:

  1. P19L46  “PHY features of in an NGV STA” remove “in”

  2. P37L38  Subclause 10.23.2.8 is under Subclause 10.13 and not under Subclause 10.23. Add subclause headings 10.23, 10.23.2.

  3. P38/P39 page numbering is missing and restarting with “1”.

  4. P41L58 Subclause 11.21.6.4.6. is under Subclause 11.18 and not under Subclause 11.21. Add sublcause headings 11.21, 11.21.6, 11.21.6.4

  5. P111L44 Reference to Figure 32-xx should be replaced by 32-18

  6. P111L61 “SS” in “NSS” should be formatted as subscript.

  7. P132L1 “SR” in “DSR” shold be formatted as subscript.

  8. P132L11 Figure P-2 is cut off on the right side. The timestamps should read t1 = TOD(I2R NDP), t4=TOA(R2I NDP)


Best regards,


Stephan

 

From: Bo Sun <sun.bo1@xxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: 27 May 2021 03:40
To: STDS-802-11@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11] IEEE P802.11bd D1.2 is available in member area

 

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Working Group Reflector ---

Hello, all, 

 

Please be informed that the IEEE P802.11bd D1.2 has been uploaded to member area (thanks to Bahar and Robert). The link to the latest comment resolution spreadsheet is as below.

 

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/20/11-20-1887-09-00bd-tgbd-lb251-comments.xlsx

 

Please the authors of comment resolutions take a look at the implementation of the resolutions in D1.2. If there's any problem, we still have chance to fix them before generating D2.0.

 

Best Regards,

Bo

 

 

 

 

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