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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBE] 11be D4.0: Call for volunteers for MDR review + estimated timeline

Dear Alfred and all,

The Editors met yesterday to discuss the reviewers' findings.  The MDR review is not complete yet - we reviewed the following findings with suggestions provided (in r9 of 1371 that Robert posted after the call). We may still need a few hours (at least Tuesday 7am Editors meeting in the September 2023 wireless interim next week) to review the remaining findings.  

Style Guide 2.1.1 – Frame Format Figures
Style Guide 2.2 – true/false
Style Guide 2.3 – “is set to”
Style Guide 2.4.1 – Information Elements/subelements – Naming
Style Guide 2.4.2 – Definition Conventions
Style Guide 2.4.3 – Element Inclusion Conventions
Style Guide 2.5 – Removal of functions and features
Style Guide 2.6 – Capitalization
Style Guide 2.7 – Terminology: frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MPDU
Style Guide 2.8.1 – normative, non-normative, ensure, which/that
Style Guide 2.8.3 – missing nouns
Style Guide 2.8.4 – unnecessary nouns
Style Guide 2.8.5 – unicast and multicast
Style Guide 2.9 – Numbers
Style Guide 2.10 – Maths operators and relations
Style Guide 2.11 – Hyphenation
Style guide 3 – Style applicable to specific Clauses

Regards,
Edward

On Mon, Sep 4, 2023 at 8:39 AM Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Dear Alfred and all,

A short update.

As of now, many of the reviewers have completed and returned their reviews, and you can review their findings in the latest version of the MDR review, which is available at 

Robert and Emily will host an 802.11 Editors meeting from 12pm ET to 2pm ET tomorrow (Tuesday, September 5) to review the findings.  Please feel free to join if you are interested in and you can find the Webex meeting invite at https://www.ieee802.org/11/

Regards,
Edward

On Tue, Jul 25, 2023 at 10:38 AM Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Dear 802.11 Editors and 802.11be members,

As you may know, a Mandatory Draft Review (MDR) process is mandatorily required for 11be to enter the SA ballot stage.

If you are willing to volunteer to do the MDR with us, please let Robert, Alfred, and me know which of the following section(s) you can take care of by the end of Tuesday, 31 July 2023:
  • Style Guide 2.1.1 – Frame Format Figures
  • Style Guide 2.1.2 – Naming Frames
  • Style Guide 2.2 – true/false
  • Style Guide 2.3 – “is set to”
  • Style Guide 2.4 – Information Elements/Subelements
  • Style Guide 2.5 – Removal of functions and features
  • Style Guide 2.6 – Capitalization
  • Style Guide 2.7 – Terminology: frame vs packet vs PPDU vs MPDU
  • Style Guide 2.8 – Use of verbs & problematic words
  • Style Guide 2.9 – Numbers
  • Style Guide 2.10 – Maths operators and relations
  • Style Guide 2.11 – Hyphenation
  • Style Guide 2.12 – References to SAP primitives
  • Style Guide 2.13 – References to the contents of a field/subfield
  • Style Guide 2.14 – MIB attributes
  • Style Guide 2.15 – Hanging Paragraphs
  • Style Guide 2.16 – Abbreviations
  • Style Guide 2.17 – Format for code/pseudocode
  • Style applicable to Definitions (Clause 3)
  • Style applicable to General Description (Clause 4)
  • Style applicable to Frame formats (Clause 9) – shall or may?
  • Style applicable to SAP interfaces (Clause 6)
  • Style applicable to New top level clauses
  • Style applicable to Annex A – Bibliography
  • Style applicable to Annex B – PICS
  • ANA
  • MIB

You would review the previous MDR reports of 11bc and 11bd to see how the MDR works.
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/22/11-22-0699-07-0000-tgbc-mdr-report.docx
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/22/11-22-0021-15-0000-tgbd-mdr-report.docx

As for the timeline, we expect you to return your review findings to Robert, Alfred, and me by the end of Wednesday, 30 August 2023.

After that, Robert will chair an IEEE 802.11 Editors meeting with the purpose to review the 11be MDR findings.  After the Editors meeting, I will then discuss with the task group on the 11be MDR findings with my recommendations (to accept or reject each of the findings) based on the feedback I receive from Editors.

Regards,
Edward

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