[STDS-802-11-TGBE] Specific comments to be discussed this Wednesday // Re: Latest version of the 11be MDR report posted

[Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Alfred and all,

For the discussion on MDR comments (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/23/11-23-1371-11-0000-ieee-p802-11be-d4-0-mandatory-draft-review-mdr-report.docx) in the joint call tomorrow (Wednesday), I plan to review the following:

• Style Guide 2.8.1 – which/that (specially, comments [13], [15], [64], [65])
• Style Guide 2.8.4 – unnecessary nouns (remaining comment [11])
• Style Guide 2.8.5 – unicast and multicast (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style Guide 2.9 – Numbers (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style Guide 2.10 – Maths operators and relations (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style Guide 2.11 – Hyphenation (specially, comment [02])
• Style Guide 2.15 – Hanging Paragraphs (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style Guide 2.16 – Abbreviations (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style guide 3 – Style applicable to specific Clauses (let me know if there is any specific comment you want to discuss)
• Style Guide 2.12 – References to SAP primitives and SAP interfaces (Clause 6)

If there is any specific comment from the above-mentioned sections that you want to discuss, please let me know, or otherwise, I may focus only on selected comments that I need TGbe for direction.

Regards,
Edward

On Fri, Oct 27, 2023 at 6:12 AM Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Dear Alfred and all,

Following the discussion on the 11be MDR report in the most recent JOINT call, I've uploaded the latest version, revision 11, at:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/23/11-23-1371-11-0000-ieee-p802-11be-d4-0-mandatory-draft-review-mdr-report.docx

For this version,  comments highlighted in blue mean that they can be accepted; comments highlighted in grey mean that they will not be implemented in the next 11be draft.

As mentioned in the JOINT call, there are still quite a lot of sections to be reviewed (tentatively on November 1).  We do encourage you to review the document in advance and let me know if there is any specific MDR comment you believe we should not accept (and instead, ask the reviewer to submit the same comment in, e.g., the initial SA ballot, for discussion).

Regards,
Edward

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