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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBE] [STDS-802-11-TGBH] 24/305r7-- the proposed text for 11bh feature extension for MLO

Hi Jay,

The change looks good to me and thanks for your efforts in doing so. I think we need to make some editorial improvements to the note and to remove any normative language. 

Could you change:
"A non-AP MLD that shored the newly allocated IRM from an AP MLD in the ESS and become a non-AP STA, may provides the
IRM as its MAC address of the frame following the procedures defined in 12.2.12.2. Similarly, a non-AP that shored the newly allocated IRM
from an AP in the ESS and become a non-AP MLD, may provides the IRM as its MLD MAC address of the frame following the procedures
defined in 12.2.12.4."
to
"A non-AP MLD that stores a newly allocated IRM received from an AP MLD and becomes a non-AP STA to associate with an AP in the same ESS, might use the IRM as its STA MAC address following the procedures in 12.2.12.2. Similarly, a non-AP that stores a newly allocated IRM received
from an AP  and becomes a non-AP MLD to associate with an AP MLD in the same ESS, might provide the IRM as its MLD MAC address of the frame following the procedures in this clause."

Thanks,

Mike

On Thu, Jun 6, 2024 at 2:36 AM <yang.zhijie@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Mike,

Thanks for the comments, your proposal is merged into the NEW Note5 in the attached document. 

Also, I clean up the mess up traces to make the document looks better,  please help review it. 




Thanks


Best Regards


Jay Yang (杨志杰)



Original
From: MMontemurro <montemurro.michael@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: 2024年06月06日 01:11
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBE] [STDS-802-11-TGBH] 24/305r7-- the proposed text for 11bh feature extension for MLO
Hi Jay,

Thanks for the updated document. In principle I do not have issues of adding text for 1) and 2). However I don't believe all the text for 1 is required and duplicates requirements in 12.2.12.1.

If an MLD that uses IRM leaves a network and comes back as a STA, it would follow the procedures in 12.2.12.1. Otherwise it follows the requirements in 12.2.12.2.

I would say that adding the following note is sufficient:
NOTE -- When a non-AP MLD using IRM connects to an AP as a non-AP STA, it follows the procedures defined in 12.2.12.1. Similarly, when a non-AP STA using IRM connects to an AP MLD, it follows the procedures defined in 12.2.12.2.

This note would replace all of the text between NOTE 4 and NOTE 5 in your contribution.

I don't think NOTE 5 is needed at all and is actually bad practice for privacy, but I'll let it go for now.

Cheers,

Mike

Cheers,

Mike



On Wed, Jun 5, 2024 at 12:45 PM Alfred Asterjadhi <asterjadhi@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
[+ TGbe reflector]

On Tue, Jun 4, 2024 at 8:09 PM Jay Yang <yang.zhijie@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi TGbe , TGbh memebers ,


I'm still working on the task to extend 11bh feature for MLO , please help review the latest proposed text(https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/24/11-24-0305-07-00be-cr-for-rcm-relevant-cids.docx).  In order to meet 11be timeline  and Wi-Fi industry timeline requirement , it's great appreciated if   we could reach consensus in this round.


See the summary of the main change in this revision as bellow:

1) According to Binita's comments in May session, I add the case of the usage of IRM when a non-AP MLD may become a non-AP STA, or vice versa.

2) Add the extension in FILS authentication as MLO FILS authentication was included into 11be draft6.0(also, 11bh draft already define the usage of the two features in FILS authentication in draft4.0).  


Welcome further questions and comments.  



Thanks


Best Regards


Jay Yang (杨志杰)



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