[STDS-802-11-TGBI] Latest comment spreadsheet uploaded

["Huang, Po-kai" <po-kai.huang@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi all,

              The latest comment spreadsheet with the initial comment assignment is uploaded.

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/24/11-24-1094-01-00bi-ieee-802-11bi-cc49-comments.xlsx

              The initial assignment is based on the discussion during the teleconference call today.

              I have gone through the remaining unassigned comments and tried to assign them to the related bulk assignments that we have done this morning.

              As the editor, I also have assigned the general editorial comments across the spec to myself.

              There are only 5 unassigned comments (see below). CID 1224 is covered by more detailed comments that are already assigned, and for the remaining 4 CIDs, I am not sure how to assign, so I leave it open for now.

              Please contact me directly if you observe any errors about the assignment in the spreadsheet.

1073	Julien Sevin	3.2	19.07	The terms "EDP AP" and "EDP non-AP STA" used in section 12.14 are not specified	Please give the definitions of  terms  "EDP AP" and "EDP non-AP STA"
1185	Mark RISON	3.2	19.27	"enhanced data privacy (EDP) parameter: [EDP parameter] Client privacy enhancements (CPE) or basic service set (BSS) privacy enhancements (BPE) parameter." is not clear.  A parameter of what?  Should this even be a definition in 3.2?	Delete the cited text
1224	Mark RISON	9.4.2.1	0.00	The Extensible and Fragmentable cells need to be filled in	As it says in the comment
1255	Mark RISON		0.00	Need to address the "TBD"s	As it says in the comment
1518	Jarkko Kneckt		0.00	A single offset calcualtion reduces operation overheads and improves STA and AP efficiency.

 

Best,

Po-Kai

 

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