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- "The non-AP MLD may transmit Class 3 frames to the target
AP MLD after receiving the TBD Response frame sent by the current AP MLD." seems meaningless since "after" can mean a very long period and the non-AP surely will send class 3
frame after it moves under target AP. Maybe the intention is to use "when"? [DH] The sentence specifies the EARLIEST time the non-AP MLD can transmit Class 3 frames so it seems correct to me. Are you saying some may interpret the “after” can
mean a very long time (which is not specified)? That does not seem like a natural interpretation of spec language. Note we cannot use “when” because at the time the Response frame is received, the non-AP MLD may or may not have frames to transmit immediately. It would be clearer to express this as "The non-AP MLD shall not transmit Class 3 frames to the target MLD until it has received the TBD Response frame." - "In addition, by this time, the DS has been notified
about the update of the destination mapping for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD." "by the time" is confusing since the sentence above uses "may" so there can be 2 possible cases. [DH] This sentence is a bit problematic. I’ll try to reword it in the next revision of the draft. This appears to be some kind of hidden "shall". The "shall" should be made explicit. Thanks, Mark --
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http://www.samsung.com/uk From: Duncan Ho <00002b3e54cff3e2-dmarc-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Hi Haorui, Thanks for your comments and please see my responses inline below. From: Haorui Yang(Rae) <yanghaorui0217@xxxxxxx>
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This email originated from outside of Qualcomm. Please be wary of any links or attachments, and do not enable macros. Hi Duncan, Thanks for the updated draft. I have the below comment: - "The non-AP MLD may transmit Class 3 frames to the target AP MLD after receiving
the TBD Response frame sent by the current AP MLD." seems meaningless since "after" can mean a very long period and the non-AP surely will send class 3 frame after it moves under target
AP. Maybe the intention is to use "when"? [DH] The sentence specifies the EARLIEST time the non-AP MLD can transmit Class 3 frames so it seems correct to me. Are you saying some may interpret the “after” can mean a very long time (which
is not specified)? That does not seem like a natural interpretation of spec language. Note we cannot use “when” because at the time the Response frame is received, the non-AP MLD may or may not have frames to transmit immediately. - "In addition, by this time, the DS has been notified about the update of the destination mapping
for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD." "by the time" is confusing since the sentence above uses "may" so there can be 2 possible cases. [DH] This sentence is a bit problematic. I’ll try to reword it in the next revision of the draft. Thanks, Duncan BRs, Haorui Yang(Rae) China Mobile ---- Replied Message ----
Hi Duncan,
Thanks for the update. I have two comments: 1) The text I added (To be done: Define the framework for seamless transition needs to be a placeholder in this contribution.) 2) I believe the following text is contentious and should not be included in this draft text at this time (pending the discussion on framework above). "In addition, by this time, the DS has been notified about the update of the destination
mapping for the non-AP MLD if necessary, from the currently AP MLD to the target AP MLD" I would suggest that you delete it at this time. Cheers, Mike On Fri, Dec 13, 2024 at 11:59 PM
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