Hi Alfred, 
  
Thank you for working on the document. Attached, please find my comments. 
  
Regards, 
Zhenpeng Shi 
  
From: Alfred Asterjadhi <asterjadhi@xxxxxxxxx>  
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Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGBN] PDT on ICF/ICR and CRF for multiple modes 
 
  
Thanks for the review and please find attached some responses. Amendments in next revision. 
 
  
Hi Alfred 
  
Thanks a lot for working the document. 
Attached please find my feedback 
  
Thanks 
Best Regards 
Insun 
  
  
Thanks Kaiying for the detailed review. Please find some responses in the attached file. Rev2 will account for the changes (will keep using
 green highlights). 
 
  
Hi Alfred, 
  
Thanks for your great work. 
Attached please find my comments. 
  
Thanks, 
Kaiying 
  
  
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Thanks for reviewing Matt.
 
Ack. Will review the latest of 936rX and account for the changes in the next REV of this document. 
 
 
 
  
In the NPCA section for AP, you have a statement that the rules are specified in NPCA, then you have a bullet that says that the
 AP is not allowed to use RTS or MU-RTS for TXOPs during NPCA, but this contradicts the table agreed to for AP in the consensus document, and it contradicts the existing language in 936rx, both of which allow an MU-RTS to be used in at least some cases. 
 
  
 
  
 
  
Thanks for the careful review, Gaius. Please find attached some responses. I will upload a REV1 shortly that incorporates all changes so far. 
PS: I like the idea below. 
 
 
  
Hi Alfred, 
  
Thanks for your work. I have bunch of mostly editorial comments for your consideration. Please see attached.
 
  
Regarding
“initial response”,
 I suppose we can still call it “initial Control response”
 and define it as, e.g., “a frame transmitted in response to an initial Control frame (ICF).”
 
  
Best regards, 
Gaius 
  
Thanks Mark. Please find inline. 
 
  
Hello Alfred, 
  
I think it should be "initial Control frame" not "Initial Control frame" 
(except at the start of a sentence/heading/cell/etc.) or "initial control
 frame". 
 
 
 
 
 [AA] Ack. will apply throughout. 
 
  
Is "initial response frame" defined somewhere? 
  
 
 
 
 
[AA] I am not certain. Will double check. 
 
"MU RTS" should be "MU-RTS" throughout. 
 
 
 
 
  
What are those strange "[2
 octets]" etc.? 
 
 
 
 
[AA] Sizes of the fields for the calculation/expectation purposes for UHR. 
 
  
Thanks, 
Mark 
  
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Hi Michail, 
Thanks for reviewing. Responses attached (updated version of the draft with incorporated changes will come up in the next few
 days). 
 
 
  
Hi Alfred (and all), 
  
Please see comments in the attached. 
  
Kind regards, 
Michail 
  
From: Alfred Asterjadhi <asterjadhi@xxxxxxxxx>
 
Sent: 04 July 2025 01:38 
To: STDS-802-11-TGBN@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGBN] PDT on ICF/ICR and CRF for multiple modes 
  
Hi all, 
 
Please find a PDT that aims at bringing clarity on the ICF/ICR and CRF details when multiple modes are enabled: 
- https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/25/11-25-1071-00-00bn-pdt-cr-for-icf-icr-details-with-multiple-modes.docx 
 
Since this touches the ICF/ICR of multiple modes I would like to ask for a careful review, especially from the POCs of the respective topics: 
- Liwen on DPS and eMLSR 
- Laurent on DUO 
- Matt on NPCA 
- Morteza on DSO 
- Po-Kai on CFP (REVmf) 
- Mohamed on LLI 
- Ming on the CRF (I included some spec text in this doc but I believe it should go in 11-25/0910 so please double check) 
 
PS: ICF/ICRs for MAP related topics are not covered in the above doc.  
 
Thanks in advance for the review and happy 4th of July. 
 
Regards, 
 
Alfred 
 
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