[STDS-802-11-TGM] Editorial docs for motion in TGmc

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Dear TGmc participants,

I have uploaded r3 of doc 230:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/16/11-16-0230-03-000m-sb1-stephens-resolutions-part-1.doc

This has been updated since last reviewed. CID 7268 was previously shown purple “more work”.

I have inserted the resolution that was discussed and agreed verbally. Likewise for CID 7229, which

is not in Doc 230.

CID	Page	Clause	Resn Status	Comment	Proposed Change	Resolution	Owning Ad-hoc
7268			V	It says "-SAP"	Change the hyphens to spaces (about 46 instances). If you really insist, you can keep them for labels in figures (but decide whether they should be hyphens or underscores), I suppose, but I just don't see the point even of that	REVISED (EDITOR: 2016-02-25 09:44:55Z) - Globally change “-SAP” to “ SAP”. Globally change “_SAP” to “ SAP”.	EDITOR
7229			J	It says "_SAP"	Change the underscores to spaces (about 30 instances). If you really insist, you can keep them for labels in figures (but decide whether they should be hyphens or underscores), I suppose, but I just don't see the point even of that	REVISED (EDITOR: 2016-02-25 09:44:55Z) - Globally change “-SAP” to “ SAP”. Globally change “_SAP” to “ SAP”.	EDITOR

I have uploaded an updated https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/15/11-15-0532-35-000m-revmc-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls

These are the tabs in the spreadsheet:

Tab Name	Number of comments
Comments	5134
EDITOR	411
GEN	163
MAC	254
ED Motion - doc 230	106
ED Motion - Editorials	209
ED Motion - Editorials rework	8
ED Motion - Trivial Technical	20
Editorials	21
Editorials objected to	1
Editorials rejected	20
Frame Formats	4
Inadequate comment	1
MAC Operation	2
MAC SAP	10
PHY SAP	1
Terminology	8

Owning Ad-hoc	Unassigned	Assigned	Submission Required	Resolution Drafted	Ready for Motion	Grand Total
EDITOR		15	25	340	31	411
ED Motion - doc 230				96	10	106
ED Motion - Editorials				208	1	209
ED Motion - Editorials rework				8		8
ED Motion - Trivial Technical					20	20
Editorials		1	20			21
Editorials objected to				1		1
Editorials rejected				20		20
Frame Formats		1	2	1		4
Inadequate comment			1			1
MAC Operation		2				2
MAC SAP		10				10
PHY SAP				1		1
Terminology		1	2	5		8

The ED Motion - doc 230 tab contains all the comments that have been reviewed in document 230 with two exceptions:

1. CID 7268 has been updated as shown above

2. CID 7744 was discussed in TGmc and a resolution agreed on 22^nd Feb. This CID is in the ED Motion - Trivial Technical tab. The resolution from doc 230 has not been applied (it was a different reject reason).

The 10 comments from doc 230 that were marked green (i.e., discussed in detail) are shown above as “ready for motion”, the remainder were subject to email review and are shown as “resolution drafted”.

We could also review the one “Editorials objected to” resolution.

CID	Page	Clause	Resn Status	Comment	Proposed Change	Resolution	Owning Ad-hoc
7374			V	It says "integral"	Delete when preceding "multiple", otherwise change to "integer"	REVISED (EDITOR: 2016-01-28 10:23:41Z) - Change all "integral" to "integer", except at 3581.57. In reply to the commenter one of "integral" or "integer" may be necessary before "multiple" to make it clear that fractional multiples are not allowed, for example the text at 680.01 needs this qualification.	EDITOR

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

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