Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmc Comment status, comments for motion heads-u

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Hi, Adrian,

Upon further review, I have to change my recommendation on a couple of these. Sorry.

So, I would like to “pull” CIDs 8170 and 8318 from the Out of Scope list for the motion on Friday.

Thanks. Mark

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Dear TGmc participants,

I got my foundational garments in a state of torsional dislocation when generating this file,

resulting in it missing some tabs.

I have corrected this in R52:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/15/11-15-0532-52-000m-revmc-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

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From: Stephens, Adrian P
Sent: 13 July 2016 11:24
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Subject: REVmc Comment status, comments for motion heads-up

Dear TGmc participants,

An updated spreadsheet is available here:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/15/11-15-0532-51-000m-revmc-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls

Comments have been reviewed and placed into two new comment groups, and there is a tab for each in the spreadsheet (common to all the ad-hocs):

1. Insufficient detail – This loosely translates to “submission required”, i.e. the resolution is of itself not sufficient for the editors to know how to implement the comment.

2. Out of Scope – This is where the comment is not on changed text, text affected by changed text or text that is the target of an existing valid unsatisfied comment.

I have also updated a number of the proposed Editorial comment resolutions in the “Editorials” tab.

In addition, assignees have been identified for all comments not in these groups.

The spreadsheet contains these tabs:

Tab Name	Number of comments
All Comments	5468
EDITOR	158
GEN	74
MAC	102
Editorials	118
Insufficient Detail	49
Out of Scope	31

I will make a motion on Friday to approve these comment resolutions.

The detailed comment lifecycle is:

Owning Ad-hoc	Unassigned	Assigned	Submission Required	Resolution Drafted	Ready for Motion	Grand Total
EDITOR	3	33	1	121		158
Editorials				118		118
Insufficient Detail		12				12
Out of Scope	3	5	1			9
PHY				1		1
Trivial Technical		16		2		18
GEN		41		28	5	74
Annex R		4				4
GEN-July8					5	5
Insufficient Detail				28		28
Intro		4				4
MIB		2				2
No page numbers		3				3
Out of Scope		2				2
PHY		1				1
Review		4				4
SAPs		4				4
Security		17				17
MAC		88	2		12	102
11ad		1				1
Frame Formats		14				14
Insufficient Detail		7	2			9
MAC Management		22				22
MAC Operation		15				15
Mesh		7				7
Motion MAC-BZ					12	12
No page numbers		1				1
Out of Scope		20				20
Security		1				1
Grand Total	3	162	3	149	17	334

The assignments are shown below. Note assignments for “Out of Scope” and “Insufficient Details” may become moot,

based on the motions I propose to bring on Friday.

summary of assignments by adhoc and comment group
Assignee	Owning Ad-hoc	Comment Group	CountOfCID	CIDs
Adrian Stephens	EDITOR	Trivial Technical	16	8236, 8220, 8207, 8317, 8274, 8263, 8254, 8250, 8029, 8188, 8178, 8125, 8096, 8089, 8076, 8010
Adrian Stephens	GEN	Annex R	2	8222, 8256
Adrian Stephens	GEN	Intro	3	8130, 8192, 8137
Adrian Stephens	GEN	MIB	1	8002
Adrian Stephens	GEN	No page numbers	1	8215
Adrian Stephens	GEN	PHY	1	8147
Adrian Stephens	GEN	SAPs	1	8073
Adrian Stephens	GEN	Security	1	8242
Adrian Stephens	MAC	Frame Formats	10	8227, 8330, 8033, 8032, 8182, 8156, 8155, 8154, 8151, 8150
Adrian Stephens	MAC	MAC Management	8	8110, 8109, 8077, 8070, 8069, 8066, 8065, 8058
Adrian Stephens	MAC	MAC Operation	10	8313, 8336, 8132, 8131, 8193, 8171, 8141, 8107, 8097, 8053
Adrian Stephens	MAC	Out of Scope	3	8333, 8331, 8293
Assaf KASHER	MAC	Out of Scope	3	8046, 8043, 8007
Carlos Cordeiro	MAC	MAC Management	2	8042, 8038
Carlos Cordeiro	MAC	MAC Operation	1	8008
Carlos Cordeiro	MAC	Out of Scope	1	8039
Edward Au	GEN	Intro	1	8091
Edward Au	GEN	SAPs	1	8072
Ganesh Venkatesan	MAC	Insufficient Detail	1	8047
Graham Smith	MAC	MAC Management	1	8055
Guido Hiertz	MAC	Frame Formats	1	8291
Guido Hiertz	MAC	No page numbers	1	8284
Jon Rosdahl	GEN	No page numbers	2	8278, 8095
Jon Rosdahl	GEN	Out of Scope	2	8283, 8122
Jon Rosdahl	GEN	Review	4	8200, 8153, 8135, 8003
Jouni Malinen	GEN	Security	16	8210, 8303, 8176, 8175, 8173, 8146, 8144, 8143, 8115, 8113, 8112, 8111, 8099, 8081, 8059, 8050
Jouni Malinen	MAC	MAC Management	3	8327, 8326, 8051
Jouni Malinen	MAC	Mesh	6	8325, 8324, 8321, 8052, 8006, 8005
Jouni Malinen	MAC	Out of Scope	1	8323
Jouni Malinen	MAC	Security	1	8322
Kazuyuki Sakoda	EDITOR	Insufficient Detail	1	8022
Kazuyuki Sakoda	GEN	MIB	1	8085
Kazuyuki Sakoda	MAC	Mesh	1	8031
Kazuyuki Sakoda	MAC	Out of Scope	1	8027
Mark Hamilton	GEN	SAPs	2	8169, 8168
Mark Hamilton	MAC	MAC Management	3	8062, 8061, 8056
Mark Rison	EDITOR	Insufficient Detail	11	8208, 8320, 8310, 8301, 8282, 8204, 8190, 8177, 8172, 8145, 8075
Mark Rison	EDITOR	Out of Scope	5	8299, 8280, 8279, 8253, 8160
Mark Rison	MAC	Insufficient Detail	6	8296, 8281, 8206, 8179, 8158, 8068
Mark Rison	MAC	MAC Management	1	8064
Mark Rison	MAC	MAC Operation	1	8202
Mark Rison	MAC	Out of Scope	6	8318, 8243, 8129, 8142, 8108, 8084
Mark Rison, Graham Smith	MAC	Out of Scope	1	8170
Mathew Fischer	GEN	Annex R	1	8123
Matthew Fischer	GEN	Annex R	1	8259
Matthew Fischer	MAC	MAC Management	1	8223
Payam Torab Jahroni	MAC	Frame Formats	1	8329
Payam Torab Jahroni	MAC	MAC Management	1	8334
Payam Torab Jahroni	MAC	MAC Operation	2	8335, 8332
Solomon Trainin	MAC	11ad	1	8041
Solomon Trainin	MAC	MAC Management	2	8045, 8044
Solomon Trainin	MAC	MAC Operation	1	8328
Solomon Trainin	MAC	Out of Scope	4	8036, 8035, 8040, 8037
Stephen McCann	MAC	Frame Formats	2	8049, 8048

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

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Tel: +1 (971) 330 6025 (mobile)

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