Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Proposed resolutions for CC25 Editorial comments.

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Thanks for these, Emily. I would like to request that the following

be pulled (unless we can agree before this afternoon):

CID 13: The field should be called … Elements since there can be more than one

CID 28: Which accept? "handle" is correct (imperative). I think this comment should be rejected

CID 164: Definitely no, else we'll end up with two "BRP frame"s for different things (11ac v. 11ad)!

CID 342: Should be "TBTT Information Set field" not "TBTT Information set"

Mark

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From: Qi, Emily H [mailto:emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: 12 July 2017 16:59
To: Mark Rison; Jouni Malinen; Stephen McCann; STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: Qi, Emily H
Subject: RE: Proposed resolutions for CC25 Editorial comments.

Hello All,

Here is an updated sheet for “Comments for approving”. Compared with 17/0956r2, r3 removed three “Reject” comments (CID100, 249, 270) and added two new “accepted” comments (CID123 and CID241):

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/17/11-17-0956-03-000m-revmd-wg-cc25-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

Please review and let me know if you have any question or suggestion. I planned to bring them to TGmd for approval on Thursday.

Regards,

Emily

From: Qi, Emily H
Sent: Tuesday, July 11, 2017 12:10 AM
To: Mark Rison <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx>; Jouni Malinen <jouni@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>; Stephen McCann <mccann.stephen@xxxxxxxxx>; STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Cc: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Proposed resolutions for CC25 Editorial comments.

Hello All

Here are 42 editorial comments (see tab/sheet “Comments for approving”) that I planned to review and bring them for approval on Thursday:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/17/11-17-0956-02-000m-revmd-wg-cc25-for-editor-ad-hoc.xls

Please review and let me know if you have any question or suggestion. Also, please let me know if you believe any of them requires more discussion and should be pulled out from the approval.

Thank you!

Emily Qi

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