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Hello Stephen,
> I'm not so sure about the "ANQP Query ID"s. However, expanding this term to "Access Network Query Protocol Query Identifier" does make it look ugly.
I wasn't suggesting expanding the term, I was thinking the "Query" bit
needed to be changed (to "Request", maybe?), since per the comment
"ANQP queries […] are not defined anywhere".
Thanks,
Mark
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From: Stephen McCann [mailto:mccann.stephen@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: 29 March 2018 12:20
To: Mark Rison <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx>
Cc: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] REVmd comment resolution for 87 CIDs uploaded
regarding CID 1241 (see below), I agree about the "ANQP query"s (IMHO should become "ANQP request"), but I'm not so sure about the "ANQP Query ID"s. However, expanding this term to "Access Network Query
Protocol Query Identifier" does make it look ugly.
Kind regards
Stephen
On 28 March 2018 at 15:47, Mark Rison <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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Thanks for this, Edward. I have the following comments:
CID 1037: at least for me with my PDF viewer D2.0 seems to have an OK hyperlink
CID 1094: I think the current sentence is saying RD applies to any of
the types aforementioned. So the meaning is different in the proposed
change. However, the first sentence seems sufficient to me, so
I would just delete the last sentence
CID 1129/1130: also issues at
p 1588 2 MHz duplicate frame
p 1634 duplicate 1 MHz control frame and duplicate 1 MHz frames and duplicate 1 MHz Support field
p 3082 S1G 2 MHz Duplicate mode PPDU
p 3094 S1G 1/2 MHz Duplicate PSDU (each 3x)
p 3110 if 1 MHz Duplicate PPDU (2x)
p 3115, p3116 ditto
23.3.9.12 1 MHz and 2 MHz duplicate transmission and instances in subclauses thereof
23.3.16.2 1 MHz or 2 MHz Duplicate mode transmission and 1 and 2 MHz duplicated segments
Table 23-29 1/2 MHz Duplicate Mode
CID 1221: also fix at 1135.60
CID 1241: there are references of "ANQP query"s in 9.4.5.24 (3x),
11.23.3.3.15 (4x inc. "ANQP Query Response frame") plus all the
"ANQP Query ID"s
CID 1253: what about 20.9.2.2.2 BRP packet structure?
CID 1254: it's not clear MPDUs have a transmit mask at all. Shouldn't it be
"measured on PPDUs containing (only?) Data frames"?
CID 1255: resolution (copied from CID 1253) doesn't work here as "Packet structure" does not appear in the caption
of F20-5
CID 1570: isn't this just a temporary draft thing? In the final spec cross-references do not include the caption
Thanks,
Mark
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Dear Dorothy and TGmd participants,
I have uploaded some proposed comment resolutions to "obvious editorial" comments (e.g., bugfix, consistency):
The 87 comments addressed as summarized in the table below. Please review and let me know if there is any question/comment.
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Commenter
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CIDs
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Carlos Cordeiro
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1020
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Donald Eastlake III
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1016, 1017
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Peter Ecclesine
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1607
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Alecsander Eitan
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1035, 1036, 1037
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Guido Hiertz
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1220, 1221, 1223, 1224, 1225, 1227, 1230, 1231, 1232
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Carl Kain
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1303
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Jouni Malinen
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1269, 1270, 1275
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Stephen McCann
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1241, 1242
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Hiroyuki Motozuka
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1168, 1169, 1170, 1172, 1173, 1174, 1175, 1176, 1177, 1181, 1184, 1185, 1186, 1187,
1178, 1171, 1167
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Al Petrick
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1617, 1618
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Mark Rison
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1326, 1383, 1385, 1399, 1409, 1492, 1510, 1514, 1530, 1570, 1575, 1568, 1540, 1531,
1513, 1496, 1355, 1327, 1348, 1380, 1406, 1523
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Kazuyubi Sakoda
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1251, 1252, 1254, 1253, 1255
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Robert Stacey
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1077, 1078, 1079, 1093, 1094, 1095, 1119, 1120, 1118, 1099, 1098, 1085, 1083, 1071,
1121, 1129, 1130, 1137
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Yunsong Yang
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1034
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