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Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Teleconference Reminder: Monday April 26 at 10am ET

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---
Hi Mark,

For your information that I have pulled out CID 347 of the latest version of 21/0730 (revision 2) as I will revise the proposed resolution together with another similar CID but it is of a different proposed resolution.  I also add the resolution - Accepted - to CID 450.  Let's talk more when we walk through this revision on the Thursday session.

Thanks and Regards,
Edward

On Mon, Apr 26, 2021 at 8:55 AM Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Mark,

Thanks for your review. 

For vendor specific,  let us discuss more during the call today.  I am open to either accept your comment to remove the hyphen or develop a more specific change to each of the vendor specific/vendor-specific elements in the draft. 

For CID 450, I forget to highlight it like the other 4 CIDs that I need input from the task group, specifically on whether it is appropriate to remove the term "desintation".  That is why I leave the resolution open.

Regards,
Edward

On Mon., Apr. 26, 2021, 06:52 Mark Rison, <m.rison@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Thanks for these, Edward.  My comments:

 

- CID 347:

 

> “vendor-specific” is a grandfathered term, i.e., a hyphen is allowed

 

And what is the rule for when a hyphen is used, and when a space

is used, then?

 

> At 1095.33 (Figure 9-290) in D0.0, replace “Vendor-specific content” with “Vendor-Specific Content”.

> At 1489.3 (Figure 9-845) in D0.0, replace “Vendor-specific content” with “Vendor-Specific Content”.

 

If you do that, then you need to describe what's in the

Vendor-Specific Content field in each case.

 

> At 1489.3 (Figure 9-845) in D0.0, replace “Vendor-specific content” with “Vendor-Specific Content”.

> At 1526.12 (Figure 9-876) in D0.0, replace “Vendor Specific Content” with “Vendor-specific Content”.

 

What is the rule for whether the "pecific" is preceded by an S or an s?

 

Also, what does a length of "Vendor-specific content" mean at 1471.25

(Table 9-337—Vendor Specific Authentication Parameters)?

 

- CID 450 is missing a proposed resolution

 

Thanks,

 

Mark

 

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From: Edward Au <edward.ks.au@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Sunday, 25 April 2021 20:58
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Teleconference Reminder: Monday April 26 at 10am ET

 

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---

Hello Mike,

 

My submission is 21/0730r0:

 

Would you reschedule my presentation to the second hour of the call?  The management property of my apartment will perform a mandatory heat pump maintenance that is scheduled in the first hour of the call that I cannot skip - sorry.

 

Regards,
Edward

 

On Fri, Apr 23, 2021 at 2:13 PM M Montemurro <montemurro.michael@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---

Hi all,

 

I just wanted to remind everyone that REVme will meet on Monday at 10am ET. The full agenda doc is posted here:

 

The agenda for the CC35 comment resolutions (the bulk of the meeting) will be:

a   Document 11-21/695r0 – Michael Montemurro (Huawei) – CIDs 51-80 (20 min)
b.       https://www.ieee802.org/11/email/stds-802-11-tgm/msg02118.html– Mark Rison (Samsung) – CIDs (remaining time to 1hr)
c.        Document <> - Edward Au (Huawei) – Editor 2 CIDs
d.       Feedback request - Dan Harkins – CID 587
e.        Document 11-21/688r0 - Ganesh Venkatesan (Intel) – CIDs <>
   

Cheers,

 

Mike

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