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Hello Mike and All,
I have updated doc 21/0738 to include a new motion tab “MOTION-EDITOR1-F”, see:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0738-06-000m-revme-wg-cc35-editor1-ad-hoc-comments.xlsx
In addition to the “MOTION-EDITOR1-E” tab, CID 315, from the “MOTION-EDITOR1-F” tab, is also due to be motioned during Monday’s TGme session.
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315
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1.5
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Need to define all the log operators in Subclause 1.5 and use them consistently (maybe have ln, log10 and log2). From a quick grep of md/D3.2, I find
- 2 instances of ln
- 2 instances of log10
- 4 instances of log_10
- 6 instances of log2 (OK, defined in 1.5)
- 2 instances of log_2
- 5 instances of log
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As it says in the comment
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REVISED (ED1: 2021-09-19 17:58:57Z) -
After the line with the definition of log2 (x) in 1.5 add the following lines, with x being italicized (4x):
log10 (x) is the logarithm of x to the base 10. For example, log10 (100) is 2.
ln (x) is the logarithm of x to the base of natural logarithms. For example, ln (10) is approximately 2.3.
In Equations (9-2), (19-75), (25-26), (25-35) (2x), (25-67) and in 20.4.4.1.2 Transmit EVM, 20.5.4.1.1 Transmit EVM, 23.3.17.4.2 Transmitter center frequency leakage, 24.5.4.1.1 Transmit EVM change the log_10 (subscript) to log10 (no subscript).
In D.2.4 Transmit Mask M change the log to log10 (5x).
In K.4.2 Surplus Bandwidth Allocation change the Ln to ln.
In Equation (R-4) and in 9.4.2.5.5 ADE mode change the log_2 (subscript) to log2 (no subscript).
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Regards,
Emily
From: Qi, Emily H <emily.h.qi@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Thursday, September 16, 2021 1:33 PM
To: STDS-802-11-TGM@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Updated REVme EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet 21/0738r5
--- This message came from the IEEE 802.11 Task Group M Technical Reflector ---
Hello Mike and All,
EDITOR1 ad hoc comment spreadsheet have been uploaded, see: https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0738-05-000m-revme-wg-cc35-editor1-ad-hoc-comments.xlsx
The following resolutions, from the “MOTION-EDITOR1-E” tab, are due to be motioned during Monday’s TGme session.
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9.4.2.30
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The frame classifier field description in this clause describing the TCLAS element is confusing since fields/subfields of various classifier types are mixed up.
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Organizing the descriptions in the order of fields/subfields of the frame classifier field sequentially for each classifier type (or groups of classifier types where the description applies to a group of classifier
types) make the description easy to follow.
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REJECTED (ED1: 2021-09-14 20:28:24Z)
Reject Reason: the comment was withdrawn by the commenter.
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575
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173.00
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34
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3.2
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The phrasing of the definitions that reference optional items, changes throughout section 3.2. The initial definitions have the format "...a X, a Y or a Z", but this then changes to "...a X, or a Y or a Z" for
some of the others. This should be consistent, as it becomes confusing for the longer lists.
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Change the cited sentence to "A 40 MHz high-throughput (HT) PPDU (TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to HT_CBW40), a 40 MHz non-HT duplicate PPDU
(TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to NON_HT_CBW40 or TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to CBW40), or a 40 MHz very high throughput (VHT) PPDU (TXVECTOR parameter CH_BANDWIDTH equal to CBW40)". In other words remove the 2nd "or" from the sentence as
it's not required.
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REVISED (ED1: 2021-09-13 16:12:45Z) Incorporate the changes in 11-21/799r1 <https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-0799-01-000m-proposed-comment-resolution-for-cid-575.docx>.
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Regards,
Emily
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