Re: [STDS-802-11] REVmc MDR report uploaded

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Some quick comments, most of which address minor issues.

1. In P1442 L31, change "do not overlap intime" to "do not overlap in time".

2. In P3236 L45, assuming that this is indeed a requirement ("shall"), change this to read "To ensure that an address is unique, a road section identifier shall be required." (Alternative: "shall be applied/used/included", etc.)

3. P3532 L51-52, change to "Some of the STAs that are associated with a 20/40 MHz BSS monitor the (or 'those') conditions that allow the establishment". I think "which" is incorrect usage here.

4. P502 L32-33, if the function in question creates the primitive, then use the term "generates" Otherwise, if the function is merely managing a primitive that was generated by some other function, then use the term "sends".

With kind regards. -- Ed Reuss

On Thu, Jul 10, 2014 at 10:31 AM, Stephens, Adrian P <Adrian.P.Stephens@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

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Dear TGmc folks,

The editors have reviewed REVmc and a report is available here:

https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/14/11-14-0781-00-0000-p802-11revmc-mdr-report.doc

There are a number of discussion points requiring input from TGmc. If you are interested in style, you might

have a look to prepare yourself for that discussion.

Best Regards,

Adrian P STEPHENS

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