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Dear Hyun Seo –
Thank you for progressing this work. Please post the current draft.
Regards,
Joseph
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Sent: Thursday, September 9, 2021 7:45 PM
To: stds-802-11@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx; Joseph Levy <jslevy@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: [STDS-802-11] 11-20/0013 - Technical Report on 5G WLAN Interworking
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Dear Joseph and AANI members,
I updated technical report in marked version (11-20/0013r15) based on document (11-21/1142r0).
I have an editorial comment in conclusion part (Line 25 in page 32)
"QoS management with QoS identification and profiles to guarantee QoS in terms of deterministic packet"
is reviewed to be changed into
"QoS management with QoS identification and profiles to control QoS in terms of bounded packet"
because WLAN implementation can't fully guarantee QoS or support deterministic packet.
I think that "control" and "bounded" are more adequate words than "guarantee" and "deterministic".
Any comments and suggestions will be appreciated.
I would like to post technical report revision 15 in mentor after email discussion.
Thanks
Hyun Seo Oh
From: "Joseph Levy" <jslevy@xxxxxxxx>
Cc:
Sent: 2021-08-31 (화) 14:21:34 (UTC+09:00)
Subject: [STDS-802-11] 11-20/0013 - Technical Report on 5G WLAN Interworking
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Dear All,
At the closing AANI SC meeting of the 802.11 WG July Plenary it was suggested that:
is technically correct and that to complete the document the introduction and conclusion should be tailored for the target audience.
(please see https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-1142-00-AANI-aani-sc-meeting-minutes-july-2021-plenary.docx)
A follow-up SP was held in the 10 August teleconference (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-1429-00-AANI-aani-sc-teleconference-minutes-10-august-2021.docx) - which suggested that 3GPP is the target audience for the technical report and that the introduction and conclusion should be updated for the target audience.
To progress this work - edits were proposed and discussed during the 24 August teleconference (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-1430-00-AANI-aani-sc-teleconference-minutes-24-august-2021.docx) please review and comment on https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-1410-00-AANI-possible-edits-to-11-20-0013r14.docx. Contributions, comments, edits, and text proposals are requested.
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Regards,
Joseph Levy
802.11 AANI Chair
P.S. - My apologies for my delay in kicking off this reflector discussion.
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