[STDS-802-11] 2021 November 802 Electronic Plenary - PAR Feedback - Personal Feedback on PAR

[Jon Rosdahl <jrosdahl@xxxxxxxx>]

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Greetings,

During today's 802.11 PAR Review SC Telecon, I missed adding in my personal feedback for the PAR.

Jon Rosdahl Comments :

802.3df - Amendment: Media Access Control Parameters, Physical Layers and Management Parameters for 200 Gb/s, 400 Gb/s, 800 Gb/s, and 1.6 Tb/s Operation, PAR and CSD

If 5.2a, you define MAC and PHY acronyms, so in 5.2b you could use MAC and PHY rather then spell them out...

Also I note that you do repeat the MAC definition, but did not for the PHY (physical Layer).

Also not sure why the semicolon, (I note that I am not expert on the use.)

What is in 5.2b: 

"Define Ethernet Media Access Control (MAC) parameters, physical layer specifications; and management parameters"

Suggest:

"5.2b: Define Ethernet MAC and PHY layer specifications and management parameters....."

Respectfully,

Jon

personal comments

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