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Hi, David,
Thanks very much for your careful check and good suggestions.
All the suggestion would be captured in the next revision (we will go through it on 13th CC).
Also, please see my response below for each comment.
BR,
weijie
发件人: David Halasz <dave.halasz@xxxxxxxx>
发送时间: 2022年12月9日
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主题: AMP editorial comments on 22/1562
Hi Weijie,
The following are just some editorial comments on 22/1562.
- Replace "walt" with "watt"
[weijie] Captured, Thanks.
- Figure 4.3-2 is referenced as Figure 4.4-2 in text. Suggest change reference to indicate 4.3-2
[weijie] Captured, Thanks.
- This one is my biggest request. Figure 4.5-1 indicates "Station", "Tag" and "Receiver". The terms lack context. There's a note that indicates to be updated.
Which device is the "AMP only IoT device"? Can the text be changed to "AMP only IoT device"?
Which device could be an AP? Can the text be changed to "i.e. Access Point"?
Should come up with a term for the 3rd device. Maybe Backscatter energy source. Or backscatter energizer? Let me know if you are already using a backscatter term.
[weijie]: I will give some explanation in the text. Tag is the AMP device. Here, Station is the Node to provide the RF power and the incident
carrier. Receiver is the node to receiver to receive the backscattering signal. This is a prototype, in the future, the AP can provide the functionalities which here the station and the Receiver can provide,
Section 5 spelling
replace "batter-free" with "battery-free"
[weijie]:Captured, Thanks.
Section 5
Not sure what was intended with the text below. Maybe an editorial issue?
The combination of communication network and sensing technology applied in the power grid will develop towards the deep integration of sensing and communication integrated with sensing and sensing.
[weijie]: It was a type, “integrated with sensing and sensing”shall be removed. The sentences is to say: deep integration of sensing and communication
is a trend for IoT applications in smart grid. AMP can be a useful tool for the deep integration of sensing and communication.
replace "WALN" with "WLAN"
[weijie] : Captured, Thanks.
Dave H.
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