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Re: [STDS-802-11] Updated list of comments received on draft P802.11bn PAR

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Thanks Lei,

As discussed, title says: “enhancements for” and not “enhancements to”, it therefore means that we are defining enhancements in order to enable the new capability, not to build on it.

We checked previous PARs on Title (2.1) and we have used here the same language as before.

Best

Laurent



Le mercredi 12 juillet 2023 à 08:38:51 UTC+2, Lei Wang (A-SID) <lei.wang1@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> a écrit :


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Dear Laurent,

 

First, thanks again for your great effort and work to pull together the11bn PAR comment discussion, resolution, and revision.

 

To try to help the 11bn PAR to go through the process smoothly, I would like to follow-up with one of my comments on the PAR in 1252r4, i.e., a clear inconsistency between the title (2.1) and the scope (5.2), as highlighted below:

  • In Title (2.1): “Enhancements for Ultra High Reliability”
    • There may be different reading of it. Well, my reading is that we already have “Ultra High Reliability”, and in this project we are going to develop enhancements for UHR.
    • After a little probing here in our group, clearly I am not alone with the understanding above.
  • In Scope (5.2.b): “The amendment adds an Ultra High Reliability capability to a Wireless Local Area Network (WLAN).”
    • This sentence clearly indicates that UHR capability is something new to be added by this project.

 

I strongly believe this inconsistency needs to be fixed. I guess we can have at least two options below:

  1. In Titel (2.1), delete “Enhancements for” (Maybe save it for the next project). Or
  2. In Scope (5.2.b), change the corresponding sentence to the following:

“The amendment introduces enhancements for Ultra High Reliability capability to a Wireless Local Area Network (WLAN).”

 

Thanks for your attention!

 

BR,

 

Lei

 

 

 

From: Dorothy Stanley <dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Tuesday, July 11, 2023 9:55 AM1252/
To: STDS-802-11@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [STDS-802-11] Updated list of comments received on draft P802.11bn PAR

 

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Dear 802.11 members,

 

The change from the r2 is to update the 802.15 comments.

 

Thank you,

 

Dorothy

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Dorothy Stanley
IEEE 802.11 WG Chair, dstanley@xxxxxxxx
Hewlett Packard Enterprise
dorothy.stanley@xxxxxxx
dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx
+1 630-363-1389

 

 

On Tue, Jul 11, 2023 at 7:48 AM Dorothy Stanley <dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

All,

 

is modified to include comments received from the 802.1 Working Group.

 

Thank you,

 

Dorothy

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Dorothy Stanley
IEEE 802.11 WG Chair, dstanley@xxxxxxxx
Hewlett Packard Enterprise
dorothy.stanley@xxxxxxx
dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx
+1 630-363-1389

 

 

On Tue, Jul 11, 2023 at 12:42 AM Dorothy Stanley <dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

All,

 

Please see https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/23/11-23-1237-01-0000-comments-from-802-on-p802-11bn-par.pptx, which now includes the preliminary 802.15 comments, and incorporates the 802.3 comments, so we have all of the comments in one document.

 

The deadline to receive comments is 6:30 pm Berlin time today, Tuesday July 11.

I will be revising the document accordingly as I receive the comments.

 

Thank you,

 

Dorothy

 

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Dorothy Stanley
IEEE 802.11 WG Chair, dstanley@xxxxxxxx
Hewlett Packard Enterprise
dorothy.stanley@xxxxxxx
dstanley1389@xxxxxxxxx
+1 630-363-1389

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