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stds-802-16: SYSREQ COMMENT




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[Submitter's Last Name]
Marin

[Submitter's First Name]
Scott

[Starting Page #]
15

[Starting Line #]
8

[(T)echnical / (E)ditorial]
E

[Detailed Description]
In section 5.1, delete all but the first sentence.

[Reason for Edit]
The examples of scalability contain several editorial flaws (e.g. "high
[?] requirement", short-radius beams, and wide-beam system). In addition
the second sentence, which contains an example, also contains a SHOULD.
It's probably not a good practice to put requirements in examples
because one could argue that examples aren't requirements. Rather than
spend a lot of meeting time repairing the examples, I recommend we
simply delete the example sentences.