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[Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 5 [Starting Line #] 1 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] Replace "Fixed Wireless Access" in the Wireless Solutions column of figure 1 with "802.16P-MP Radio". [Reason for Edit] It was always intended that one of the areas that would be serviced by our standard would be the residential market. [Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 7 [Starting Line #] 6 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] Remove sentence that reads "Typical bands allocated for 802.16 use are very wide, allowing for the bands to be channilized." [Reason for Edit] The bands are not allocated for 802.16 use they are allocated for LMDS use. [Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 8 [Starting Line #] 21 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] Delete the sentence "The resultant topology is very similar the Hybrid fiber Coax (HFC) cable TV network." [Reason for Edit] The topology is in no way the same as an HFC network. Some of the access protocol may be similar but that is the only reason they are alike. [Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 16 [Starting Line #] 40 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] Delete the Paragraph from line 40 to 44. [Reason for Edit] Errored seconds is not a measurement of availability. The paragraph is in error. [Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 18 [Starting Line #] 4 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] None of the definition are in section 10.1 Vocabulary of Terms. At a minimum these definitions should be added to section 10.1. The definitions should be evaluated for correctness. [Reason for Edit] The Vocabulary Ad Hoc did not consider these definitions and did not include them in the vocabulary list. [Submitter's Last Name] Fishel [Submitter's First Name] George [Starting Page #] 20 [Starting Line #] 6 [ (T)echnical For content related material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar, etc.] T [Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion , Deletion, Change] Change the column hearing "Bitrate(s)" to "throughput rate(s)" [Reason for Edit] The over-the-air bit rate contains additional overhead bits for things like forward error correction that should not be included in this column. |