stds-802-16: TG1 COMMENT:

["Hoon Choi" <hchoi@antd.nist.gov>]

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Since the acronym "MSAP" is used in the draft, it seems
better to add it in section 1.3.
"MSAP  MAC Service Access Point"
  
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To fix a typo in draft #1



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Font size of this line is smaller than other lines. 
  
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To fix a typo in draft #1


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
"Figure 5-43" must be read as "Figure 79" 

[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1


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"Bss" should be typesetted as "BSs"
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
"It useful" must be read as "It is useful" 

[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Delete an extra period at the end of the line.  
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The word "modem" should be read as "CPE". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The reference number "2.13.8.4.1" should be read as "2.13.8.3.1". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The reference number "2.13.8.4.2" should be read as "2.13.8.3". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The word "subse" should be read as "subset". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
"the purpose..." should be typesetted as "The purpose...". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1


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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
The character " " " at the end of the line should be read as " : ". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
"If the CPE checks that it can support the service and responds 
using ..." should be read as 
"If the CPE checks that it can support the service, it responds 
using ...". 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 92 is duplicated with Figure 91, so it must be deleted. 
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
A Figure of SDL for "DSD-Remote Holding Down" is missing.
Figure 5-106 of IEEE 802.16.1mc-00/14r0 can be included for this figure
as Figure 114 of the draft #1.
  
[Reason for Edit]
To fix a typo in draft #1