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stds-802-16: TG1 COMMENT:



Title: stds-802-16: TG1 COMMENT:

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Move Table 8 from section 2.5.2.2 to end of section 2.5.2.1

[Reason for Edit]
Table 8 is part of UCD description rather than DCD







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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Amend second sentence in 3.3.2 second para "These packets consist of a one-byte
synchronisation pattern (Byte 1) and a one-byte Pointer (Byte 2) followed by
186 bytes of payload (Bytes 3-188)"

[Reason for Edit]
To clarify the origin for the pointer field - is first byte of packet byte 0
or byte 1?




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Amend first sentence below figure 131 in 3.3.3.1 second para "The pointer
field identifies the byte number in the packet (first byte = byte 1) which
indicates....."

[Reason for Edit]
To clarify the origin for the pointer field - is first byte of packet byte 0
or byte 1?



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
line 17 Amend sentence  "The pointer field identifies the byte
number in the packet (first byte = byte 1) which indicates....."

[Reason for Edit]
To clarify the origin for the pointer field - is first byte of packet byte 0
or byte 1?




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Amend last two Normative reference:

ITU-T Recommendation J.116, "Interaction.....

ITU-R Recommendation F.1499, "Radio transmission.....

[Reason for Edit]
These two recommendations are now approved by ITU-T and ITU-R




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Line 16 change "user" to "use"

[Reason for Edit]
Spelling mistake



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Line 39 change "IDSN" to "ISDN"

[Reason for Edit]
Spelling mistake







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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
p7 line 1 change "section A" to "section 1.5"
also page 7 line 23 and page 9 line 33

[Reason for Edit]
Broken cross-references




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Line 39 delete "[ R. Sanders][conferred to ad-hoc QoS group]"

[Reason for Edit]
Appears to be a leftover comment which should be removed.  Did this ad-hoc group report back?





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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
p 77 line 64 delete "sorted by IUC"
p 78 line 1 delete "sorted by connection ID"

[Reason for Edit]
MAP information elements have to be in time order, which is not neccessarily
IUC order or connection ID order






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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Search entire document for "PCD" and replace with "UCD" and/or "DCD" as appropriate in each
case.  Check all figures as well

[Reason for Edit]
The PCD message has been replaced by the DCD and UCD messages.




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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 123.  Should there be a pointer to end of burst to CPE X?

[Reason for Edit]
Possible inconsistency in diagram