stds-802-16: SUB11 COMMENT

[David Trinkwon <trinkwon@compuserve.com>]

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Move item up one line and delete editorial comment


[Reason for Edit]
Implementation of previously approved editorial change



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Insert the following text :

For clarification, the performance characteristics of the 802.16.3 air 
interface SHALL apply at a hypothetical point within the SS and BS where the 
MAC and PHY layers terminate.


[Reason for Edit]
To avoid confusion, especially that delay and capacity parameters exclude voice 
codec delays and higher layer protocol overheads, etc.




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Insert the following text :

Note : This does not preclude the use of other methods of providing repeater, 
relay or remote antenna capabilities using non 802.16.3 standard interfaces 
between the BS and RF, provided that the interface between the RF and SS 
remains standard.



[Reason for Edit]
Clarification of intent.


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Change "bandwidth" to "capacity" or "throughput"


[Reason for Edit]
Technical accuracy.



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "bandwidth" to "capacity"

[Reason for Edit]
Technical accuracy



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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Change "bandwidth" to "capacity" (multiple occurrences)

[Reason for Edit]
Technical accuracy



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Insert to read

...to shut down and reactivate a subscriber station...

...to shut down and reactivate a base station remotely.

[Reason for Edit]
Operational requirement to avoid truck rolls to investigate potentially faulty 
units.




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Insert after "key management"

service suspend/resume, relocation, anti-cloning,

[Reason for Edit]
Implementation of previous discussion


David Trinkwon
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