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change “Carrier ense” to read “Carrier sense”
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correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the “Mediaum” to “Medium”
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correct typo
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change formatting in Figure 1 to allow the word “security” to be read
properly
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
formatting does not allow the word to be properly read
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change formatting in Figure 1 to allow the word “architecture” to be
properly read
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
formatting does not allow the work to be properly read
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the work “toaddress” to read “to address”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “andlegacy” to read “and legacy”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “singleBWA” to read “single BWA”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
in Figure 2 change “righgs,” to “rings,”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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in Figure 2 change “Fibe r” to read “Fiber”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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change
in Figure 2 change formatting to be able to read the word “systems”
which is now obscured by a graphic
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
graphic overshadows the text
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
in Figure 2 change formatting to enable the word “Constrained” to be
properly displayed
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
formatting compresses the last characters in the word
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in Figure 2 change the formatting to enable the word “Radio” to be
successfully read
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
formatting currently causes the last several letters of the word to be
overprinted
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in Figure 2 change formatting to enable the word “Access” to be
successfully read
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
current formatting causes the last several letter to be overprinted
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
in Figure 2 change the formatting to enable the word “Radio” to be
successfully read
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
current formatting causes the last several letters to be overprinted
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
in Figure 2 change “Appcliations” to “Applications”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “refer” to “refers”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
grammar
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
add the definitions of SDH and PDH to section 1.2 as noted in the text
or delete the reference to section 1.2
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
document consistency
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete the last sentence which reads “ATM standards define a rich set of
quality of service (QoS) guarantees for various service categories.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
this sentence is a duplication of the first sentence of the paragraph
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “802.26.1.1” to read “802.16.1”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
move the last sentence of paragraph one, “LOS blockage by foliage also
contributes heavily to signal attenuation.”, to the end of paragraph
two on line 40, after “rainfall.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
place the caveat on signal attenuation close to the statement on radio
range
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “azmuthal” to “azimuth”
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grammar
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
move Figure 3 to this location
[Reason for Edit]
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place the figure close to where it is referenced
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
place a comma after the phrase “(due to rain)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
grammar
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “(30%” to read “30%”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete the large space on lines 5 through 9
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “demandand” to read “demand and”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Variable Bit: Non-Real-Time Rate” to read “Variable Bit Rate:
Non-Real-Time”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Higher variations of delay may be tolerable since applications
that fall into this category allow for priority traffic to consume
bandwidth they do.” to read “Higher variations of delay may be tolerable
since applications that fall into this category are designed to
accommodate delays in the availability of data.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
clarify the language
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “, The X Window System, NFS, Microsoft or Novell
File Sharing, etc.)” to read “, The X Window System, Microsoft or Novell
File Sharing (NFS), etc.)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct placement of the acronym
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “, The X Window System, NFS, Microsoft or Novell
File Sharing, etc.)” to read “, The X Window System, Microsoft or Novell
File Sharing (NFS), etc.)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct placement of the acronym
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “system,ATM” to “system, ATM”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “TheATM” to read “The ATM”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “The aspect of” to “The aspects of”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the figure to include a direct link from the “Other Conv.” layer
directly to the PHY by removing the shading on a portion of the MAC and
TC layers below the “Other Conv.” column.
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
to be consistent with the text on page 58, line 43
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording “it is necessary to.to keep” to read “it is necessary
to keep”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the sentence to delete the “..)” characters after the words
“connection ID”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “potion” to “portion”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “can be cidused” to “can be used”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
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M
[Starting Page #]
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1
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “traffic likeIP” to read “traffic like IP”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “16-bit CIDpermits a” to “16-bit CID permits a”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
32
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17
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
remove the extra “)” after the work “future” in the table entry under
time reference
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
34
[Starting Line #]
49
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “i.e. the containing the” to read “i.e.
containing the”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
35
[Starting Line #]
3
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “receive frequency to be used” to read “receive
frequency is to be used”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
37
[Starting Line #]
19
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete the extra empty line
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
37
[Starting Line #]
21
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “to which vendors products” to read “to which
vendor’s products”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
grammar
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
38
[Starting Line #]
25
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
include the definition of MIB either in the text stream or in the
glossary
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
MIB has not been defined
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
41
[Starting Line #]
45
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “the all of the Dynamic” to read “all of the
Dynamic”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
41
[Starting Line #]
36
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
provide acronyms to support future use of the terms DSA, DSC, and DSD
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
completeness
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
42
[Starting Line #]
26
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “order, i.e., the containing” to read “order, i.e.
containing”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
42
[Starting Line #]
36
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “complex in that is composed” to read “complex
in that it is composed”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
42
[Starting Line #]
51
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “complex in that is composed” to read “complex
in that it is composed”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
45
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35
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “Flow Encoding that specifies” to read “Flow
Encoding as described and defined in Table 3 that specifies”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
insert reference to the table
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
55
[Starting Line #]
49
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
insert a blank line between line 49 and 50
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
59
[Starting Line #]
1
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Does the transmission order of the data refer to the base station,
subscriber station, or both?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
statement needs clarification as to where it applies
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
65
[Starting Line #]
1
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Clarification is needed here. Does this requirement mean that the SS
must have two software routines running in parallel to monitor logical
channel assignments or two independent RF channels to read MAC
management messages. See also page 83, line 65, and page 84, line 1.
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
the current description does not make clear the messages are to be dealt
with
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
66
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23
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “DMC” to “DBTC”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct incorrect message name
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
67
[Starting Line #]
2
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
a descriptor label is missing after the number “1”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
missing units
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
81
[Starting Line #]
4
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “Count of theUCD which” to read “Count of the UCD
which”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
81
[Starting Line #]
18
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “{0.,1,3}” to read “{0,1,3}”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
83
[Starting Line #]
44
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
in the 2nd column of the table change the entry from “11-14” to “12-14”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with the line above showing 11 is empty
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
83
[Starting Line #]
65
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
when a channel is changed is it a “logical” change or a physical channel
change to another frequency?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
current wording is unclear
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
84
[Starting Line #]
30
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “definitions coneyed by the DCD message, the CPE”
to read “definitions conveyed by the DCD message, the SS”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo and replace CPE with SS
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
84
[Starting Line #]
50
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
insert a value for the units on the length of fields after the number 1
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct omission
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
86
[Starting Line #]
48
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
delete the extra “space” at the beginning of the line
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
87
[Starting Line #]
5
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
add a units value to the length of fields value after “1”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provide omitted units value
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
87
[Starting Line #]
24
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
the “details of transmit equalization” are not listed below as
referenced by the table entry on Transmit Equalization Adjust, is this
because Transmit Equalization has been removed from the document or the
details have not yet been provided?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
clarification of transmit equalization status and details
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
89
[Starting Line #]
62
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
why is there a bold sentence regarding the order in which configuration
settings are reflected back to the BS, is there a requirement to process
them at the SS in an order different than that in which they are
processed in the BS which would indicate that special care is needed in
meeting this requirement? And why would a requirement of this type
exist?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
determination of exact requirements on processing of the configuration
data
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
90
[Starting Line #]
13
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “supported by the SS(BTC1 based on” to read
“supported by the SS (BTC) based on”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
92
[Starting Line #]
39
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “As defined in 2.3” to read “As defined in section
2.3”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
94
[Starting Line #]
56
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “field is one octect.” to read “field is one
octet.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
107
[Starting Line #]
52
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
provde unit of measure for the type and length fields of the MCA-REQ TVL
encodings, is it byte?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
unit designation is missing
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
109
[Starting Line #]
40
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
replace “(DMC-REQ)” with “(DBTC-REQ)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
mislabeling of figure 48
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
113
[Starting Line #]
19
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Transmission Gap” with “Transition Gap”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
Wayne
[Membership Status: (M)ember; (O)bserver; (N)either]
M
[Starting Page #]
115
[Starting Line #]
64
[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording “individualSSs” to “individual SSs”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
[Submitter's Last Name]
Hunter
[Submitter's First Name]
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording of “in theUCD message” to read “in the UCD message”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “prevoius” to “previous”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
chnge the word “lenfth” to “length”
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Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “syncronous” to “synchronous”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
add a “period” after the last sentence on the page after the words “in
Figure 61”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
add a “period” at the end of the last sentence on the page, after the
words “in Figure 62”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording “fromUCD” to read “from UCD”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
A reference is made to the TBD PHY specification paragraph on
acquisition that does not exist yet. Recommend that a section is created
in the PHY section that provides simple requirements on frequency and/or
phase uncertainty as the definition of signal acquisition, given that
the receiver estimates of these quantities are within some suggested
bounds.
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
There is a need for a simple, non-implementation specific, definition on
signal acquisition.
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marked "TBD"]
TBD
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
This would refer to the section suggesting specifications on the
estimated frequency and phase of the incoming signal referenced in the
comment just prior to this one.
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
There is a need to define acquisition success which would then enable
data decoding to proceed
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording “fromUCD” to read “from UCD”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Note 2 appears to have wording that overwrites some of the labels that
might be a portion of the figure
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
reformat text and check readability, current text is not completely
readable
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording in the box in the figure on the right side from
“RemoveSS” to “Remove SS”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the formatting or wording in the box at the top to reveal the
complete spelling of the word “to”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct formatting error
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording of the figure label from “Dynamic Deletion (DSD)” to
DSD
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous figure’s labels
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word from “Uint16” to “uint16”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous usage
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the word “Uint8” to read “uint8”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous usage
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Uint8” to “uint8”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous usage
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Uint8” to read “uint8”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous usage
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Uint8” to read “uint8”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
consistency with previous usage
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marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 6-1 is referenced, but it appears that no table of that number,
or with the suspect subject matter is available
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Figure 6-1 is missing, suspect that it may reference a figure that would
be a companion to Table 64
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 6-1 is referenced, but it appears that no table of that number,
or with the suspect subject matter is available
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Figure 6-1 is missing, suspect that it may reference a figure that would
be a companion to Table 64
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 6-2 is referenced, but it appears that no table of that number,
or with the suspect subject matter is available
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Figure 6-2 is missing, suspect that it may reference a figure that would
be a companion to Table 64
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Figure 6-1 is referenced, but it appears that no table of that number,
or with the suspect subject matter is available
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Figure 6-1 is missing, suspect that it may reference a figure that would
be a companion to Table 64
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “can vary in time” to “can vary over time”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Clarity of meaning
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the wording from “either based upon” to “based either upon”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
grammar
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “in section Figure 2.6.4” to “in section 2.6.4, Figures 51 and
52”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
insertion of proper figure numbers from referenced section
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “(i.e .47hex)” to “(i.e. 47hex)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
fix typo
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “as described in xxxx.” to “as described in Table 66 and Figure
123.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provides references to the proper table and figure
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
G
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
correct formatting of text line length problems
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
current formatting causes unreadability
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
revise figure 122, or add a figure for QPSK and one for 64 QAM to show
a sample implementation for each scheme
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
the implementation shown in figure 122 does not clearly demonstrate the
way the interleaver should work with q = 0 or q = 2, two other figures
can be provided to expand figure 122 to include these cases
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
T
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Is it reasonable to utilize 2 different constellations for the same
modulation scheme used in Mode A and Mode B, the 16 QAM scheme here
differs from that of the 16 QAM constellation shown in Figure 132 on
page 292
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
Questions why two implementations must be implemented for the same
constellation
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “recover” to “recovery”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “code his useful” to “code is useful”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct type
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “up to 16 byte errors.” To “up to 16 errored bytes.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct grammar and clarity of meaning
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Product code” to “product code”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “D22, …..E88” to “D22,…., E88”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos,
grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “purposes of encoding” to “purpose of encoding”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
grammar
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
add a definition or explanation of CAZAC sequences
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
CAZAC sequences are used presumably because of special properties they
have, but these properties are not mentioned
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “QPSK, 16-QAM, (both mandatory) and 64-QAM.” To “QPSK, 16-QAM,
and 64-QAM (optional).”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
to co-ordinate these requirements with those of page 270, line 9.
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “first MACPDU” to read “first MAC PDU”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Product code” to read “product code”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “D22, ….E88” to read “D22, ….., E88”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correct typo
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the table heading “(32,24)” to read “(30,24)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
to be consistent with the aggregate code rate value of 0.608
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “for the purposes of encoding.” to “for the purpose of encoding.”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
correction of grammar
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “QPSK must be supported, while 16-QAM and 64-QAM are optional,”
to read “QPSK must be supported, along with 16-QAM while 64-QAM is
optional,”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
to be consistent with section 3.1.3.3
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Max. Tx phase noise” to read “Max. Rx phase noise”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
The specification explanation defines the required receiver phase noise
performance (note the reference to receiver tracking loop bandwidth),
not that of a transmitter.
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change the text from “10-66 GHz / +- 5 ppm (including aging and
temperature variations)” to read “recommend not less than 5ppm, 10 ppm,
or 30 ppm as noted in the following frequency bands: 10 – 19.7 GHz / +-
5 ppm (including aging and temperature variations), 19.7 – 31.3 GHz / +-
10 ppm (including aging and temperature variations), 31.3 – 66 GHz / +-
30 ppm (including aging and termperature variations)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provides a workable specification modeled after the US - FCC “part 101”
specification for these frequency bands
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Tx symbol Timing accuracy” to read “Tx symbol timing accuracy”
[Reason for Edit]
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
insert a value of “-25 dB” for the requirement on Adjacent channel
interference
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provide a reasonable value for ACI
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identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a comment on a section
marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Composite Group delay” to read “Composite group delay”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Spectral Mask” to “Spectral mask”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
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marked "TBD"]
E
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
change “Composite Amplitude” to “Composite amplitude”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
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marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
insert section to read as follows: “Max. Tx phase noise 10 kHz
away (-68 dBc), 100 kHz away (-78 dBc), 1 MHz away (-98 dBc)”
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provide reasonable requirement on transmitter phase noise performance
for the base station
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marked "TBD"]
TBD
[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
replace “TBD at a later date” with “10 hKz away (-68 dBc), 100 kHz away
(-78 dBc), 1 MHz away (-98 d
Bc)
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
provide reasonable requirement on transmitter phase noise performance
for the subscriber station
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grammar, etc.; (G)eneral to
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Are the last 3 or 4 table entries really minimum performance
specifications on the receiver?
[Reason for Edit]
Hunter(M), Meyer(O), Robinson(M), Smith(N), Wang(N) team comments
It appears that the last 3 or 4 entries relate to receiver performance
characteristics rather than transmitter characteristics