stds-802-16: TG1 COMMENT

[Phil Guillemette <PGuillemette@spacebridge.com>]

[Submitter's Last Name]
Simard

[Submitter's First Name]
Francois

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
For each "feature bit" in sub-sections 2.3.3.1.3 to 2.3.3.1.6 inclusively,
specify what bit values represent
"Not allowed" and "Allowed" values. For example:

bit #0: QPSK, 0 - Not allowed, 1 - Allowed

[Reason for Edit]
For each "feature bit" in sub-sections 2.3.3.1.3 to 2.3.3.1.6 inclusively,
it is not clear what bit values represent
"Not allowed" and "Allowed" values.

[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
following "...adaptive modulation" insert ",Frequency Switched Division
Duplexing (FSDD),"

[Reason for Edit]
To give introduction to FSDD prior to section 3.2.1.


[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
remove the words "the ability"

[Reason for Edit] 
The sentence did not seem continuous with these words.


[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
Delete the two sentences that begin at "Elements that are idnetified..."

[Reason for Edit] 
This information is already at the beginning of the document.  If we were to
repeat the information, then it would make more sense to repeat it at the
beginning of section 3 as opposed to only within the Mode A overview where
some people may miss it while reading the document.


[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

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Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
remove the word "Figure" in reference to section 2.6.4

[Reason for Edit]
the word should not be there.

[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
Replace "xxx" with "EN 301 210".

[Reason for Edit]
was missing the reference


[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
Insert the actual polynomial into or following figure 127.

[Reason for Edit] 
To be consistent with 3.2.1.2.2.

[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

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Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
insert "The preambles are not randomized."  before "The seed value..."

[Reason for Edit] 
Just to be clear that the preamble is not randomized.

[Submitter's Last Name] 
Guillemette

[Submitter's First Name] 
Phil
 
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change] 
insert "(constant amplitude zero auto-correlation)" following the word
"CAZAC".

[Reason for Edit] 
This is the first time the abreviation is used so it should be expanded.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

[Submitter's First Name]
Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "Utilization of MAC scheduling and QoS traffic parameters for
upstream Service Flows".

[Reason for Edit]
Consistency with the following sentence.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

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Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "upstream active Service Flows also have a 16-bit Connection
Identifier (CID)".

[Reason for Edit]
Table 29 indicates that CID is not used for downstream service flows.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

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Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "mapping to a SFID only exists when the connection has active
service flow(s)".

[Reason for Edit]
In page 158, line 35, it reads "active Service Flows also have a 16-bit
Connection Identifier (CID)".

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

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Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "Active Service Flows are mapped to a 16-bit Connection
Identifier (CID)".

[Reason for Edit]
In page 158, line 35, it reads "active Service Flows also have a 16-bit
Connection Identifier (CID)".

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

[Submitter's First Name]
Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "Outgoing user data is submitted to the MSAP by a convergence
sub-layer process".

[Reason for Edit]
Language.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

[Submitter's First Name]
Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "The information delivered to the MSAP includes the Connection
Identifier identifying ".

[Reason for Edit]
Typo.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

[Submitter's First Name]
Eko

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Should read "The Service Flow for the connection is mapped to the Connection
Identifier (CID)".

[Reason for Edit]
Language.

[Submitter's Last Name]
Wibowo

[Submitter's First Name]
Eko

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O

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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Identify the meaning of "N" and "0,1".

[Reason for Edit]
Symbols not defined.