stds-802-16: TG1 Comment

["Dean Chang" <dchang@apertonet.com>]

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace the contents of Section 2.5 of the document 802161-00/01r4 by the
contents of Section 4.1 of the document 802161c-00_11
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Sections 2.1 and 2.2 of the document 802161c-00_11

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add the row in Table 3 of Section 4.2 of the document 802161c-00_11 to Table
11 of the document 802161-00/01r4
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Section 2.2 of the document 802161c-00_11

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add Figure 10 in Section 4.3 of the document 802161c-00_11 to Section 2.5.3
of the document 802161-00/01r4
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Section 2.2 of the document 802161c-00_11

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add the IE in Figure 11 in Section 4.3 of the document 802161c-00_11 to
Figure 26 in Section 2.5.3 of the document 802161-00/01r4
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Section 2.2 and Section 3.0 of the document
802161c-00_11

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Replace Figure 28 in Section 2.5.4 of the document 802161-00/01r4 by Figure
12 in Section 4.4 of the document 802161c-00_11 .
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Section 2.2 and Section 3.0 of the document
802161c-00_11

[Submitter's Last Name] Varma
[Submitter's First Name] Subir
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[(T)echnical for Content-Related Material; (E)ditorial for typos, grammar,
etc.; (G)eneral to identify a problem but not a solution; (TBD) for a
comment on a section marked "TBD"]
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[Detailed Description of Proposed Insertion, Deletion, Change]
Add the row in Table 4 of Section 4.5 of the document 802161c-00_11 to Table
13 in Section 2.5.5 of the document 802161-00/01r4
[Reason for Edit]
See the contents of Section 2.2 of the document 802161c-00_11