RE: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
Kshitij,
Thanks for reminding me to update my out of date estimate of 5%. I placed that value in the Editor's note when I first put the PICS template into Clause 5 and never updated it after that. I will try to remember to update it in the future.
If you, or anyone, believe that there are missing SHALLs in Clause 5, or in any Clause, I urge you to submit comments pointing out where they are missing, rather than merely voting against the draft because you think some are missing. They will not magically show up without those who notice such omissions clearly noting them via comments.
jl
-----Original Message-----
From: Kshitij Kumar [mailto:kkumar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, May 12, 2003 8:42 AM
To: 'Tom Alexander'; Bob. Love; RPRWG
Subject: RE: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
Importance: High
Tom,
Thanks for your email. Responsible voting is exactly what I have been hoping
for, as well. We are in agreement on that.
I did a search for the word "shall" through clause 5 of Draft 2.2.
I found 6 or 7 instances of the word shall in the text before the PICS. Each
one of these shall instances had a PICS entry already. However, the PICS
also said that the editors estimated the level of completeness of this
clause's PICS to be 5%.
Some rudimentary mathematics would show that we expect approximately 19
times the current level of PICS - which would be 114 PICS. Avoiding specific
numbers and errors in estimation, it is very clear that there are many many
more SHALL statements needed in this one clause alone. Some of these might
be a matter of editing - changing MUST to SHALL, for instance. However, I
suspect that it means that a lot of new "SHALLS" will need to be inserted
into the main text, as opposed to editorial changes to existing text.
Each such SHALL statement must be voted in, one SHALL at a time. New
technical text or text that changes current technical behaviour cannot be
considered editorial.
Combined with others comments regarding Topology/Protection and other
clauses that are still churning, I still strongly feel the standards process
would be speeded up by taking one more round to fix these problems.
That is the reason why we need to vote responsible, and vote AGAINST this
draft becoming the standard.
Thanks,
Kshitij Kumar,
Director, System Architecture,
Lantern Communications.
408-521-6806
-----Original Message-----
From: Tom Alexander [mailto:tom@xxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Saturday, May 10, 2003 8:48 AM
To: Robert D. Love; RPRWG
Subject: Re: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
Bob,
If I may clarify a couple of points:
I certainly agree with you that the PICS are extremely important for the RPR
standard
as they will be used by vendors and customers to determine conformance to
the
standard. However, it should be kept in mind that the PICS are merely the
expression
of the "shall"s and "may"s in the normative text; i.e., the mandatory and
the optional
elements in the standard. The editors have no license to determine what is
mandatory
and what is optional; this is entirely the province of the WG.
So far, I have not seen much WG attention paid to the mandatory or optional
attributes
of various elements in the normative text. For example, I could find only
two comments
(#966 and #444) in the D2.1 comment database pertaining to whether a feature
was
a requirement or not. I find it hard to believe that a 600-page draft could
be so close
to perfection that there are only two instances of improper use of
shall/may. Therefore,
I foresee that at some point there will have to be a detailed review by the
WG of all the
features in the draft and whether these features are mandatory or optional.
Until such a
review is performed, it is clearly a waste of time for the editors to start
the mechanical
process of converting shalls/mays into PICS items. It is also not helpful to
use the PICS
tables as an aid to finding out what is optional/mandatory - this leads to a
false sense of
security, because it is far too easy to look at a detailed PICS table and
miss features
that are not covered. It is much preferable to go through the draft text
line by line and
determine if the "shall"s and "may"s are present in the proper places. Once
that is done,
generating the PICS entries is a simple (though time-consuming) process.
With respect to Sponsor Ballot: I absolutely agree that we should put out a
complete
and "clean" standard to Sponsor Ballot. This is not merely a good idea but
also the
responsibility of the WG - after all, if the draft fails in Sponsor Ballot,
it will get kicked
back to the WG and we'll be back to square one. Thus, I did not intend to
imply that we
should vote to go to Sponsor Ballot right away. However, I believe that we
still have
plenty of time to "clean up" the draft during Working Group ballot
recirculations, so
my position was that it would not hurt to have a passing WG ballot at this
stage. I
believe that achieving a passing WG ballot brings a higher level of
consensus and
cooperation during meetings, and that will assist in speeding up the process
of
getting a good draft out to Sponsor Ballot.
Best regards,
- Tom Alexander
Chief Editor, P802.17
----- Original Message -----
From: "Robert D. Love" <rdlove@xxxxxxxxx>
To: "Tom Alexander" <tom@xxxxxxxxxxxx>; "RPRWG" <stds-802-17@xxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, May 09, 2003 11:12 AM
Subject: Re: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
>
> Tom, we are certainly in agreement that it is important that we all vote
> responsibly. I have a bit of a different point of view on the PICS since
> that will be the basis for conforming to the standard. I entirely agree
> with you that starting the PICS too early is a waste of time. However, I
> don't think we need to wait for a passing ballot to begin creating them.
We
> are, as a group, pretty aware of the technical issues that are still open.
> If we can close most of them in Montreal, then I believe we should make
sure
> everyone has a good chance to carefully review the PICS on the next ballot
> cycle.
>
> Regarding your statement:
> Therefore, it would seem that there is not a whole lot of harm done in
> starting down the
> road to Sponsor Ballot, especially if Sponsor Ballot is the "real"
balloting
> process anyway.
>
> For two reasons I take strong exception to the idea that we still have
time
> to "clean up" the draft after we begin sponsor ballot. The first reason
is
> that it is up the WG to put a good complete standard out to sponsor
ballot.
> The second reason is more practical. I believe that if we have a lot of
> delay going through sponsor ballot that it will strongly impact RPR sales.
> Therefore, I am pushing everyone to get the draft in a state that will
allow
> it to sale through sponsor ballot.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Robert D. Love
> President, LAN Connect Consultants
> 7105 Leveret Circle Raleigh, NC 27615
> Phone: 919 848-6773 Mobile: 919 810-7816
> email: rdlove@xxxxxxxx Fax: 208 978-1187
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Tom Alexander" <tom@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
> To: "RPRWG" <stds-802-17@xxxxxxxx>
> Sent: Friday, May 09, 2003 10:32 AM
> Subject: Re: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
>
>
> >
> > Colleagues,
> >
> > I agree with the general sentiments expressed by Bob and Kshitij, which
is
> > to
> > vote responsibly with a view to obtaining a good, technically correct
and
> > complete standard in an expeditious manner. I would, however like to
offer
> a
> > couple of clarifications.
> >
> > Regarding PICS entries: note that the general sentiment that I have
heard
> > expressed in 802 groups is that PICS entries are an editorial matter
> rather
> > than a technical matter. This is not as counterintuitive as it seems.
Note
> > that
> > the PICS entries are based entirely on the words "shall" and "may" that
> > occur in normative portions of the text. Therefore, PICS entries may be
> > regarded as automatic (one day, perhaps, we'll have an 802 PICS
generator
> > program that scans the text and creates all of the PICS tables!). The WG
> > therefore automatically triggers the creation and removal of PICS
entries
> by
> > adding or removing the "shall"s and "may"s in the clause text. The
editors
> > are
> > expected to note all of the "shall"s and "may"s in the draft, and ensure
> > that
> > the PICS are changed to reflect the change in the normative text. There
is
> > no
> > vote or comment required in connection with the PICS; for example, a
vote
> to
> > insert a PICS entry is redundant with the vote that inserted the
> > corresponding
> > "shall". As there is no point voting twice on the same matter -
especially
> > when
> > it's not possible to vote differently in the two votes! - PICS have been
> > normally
> > considered to be an editorial matter. Certainly PICS entries can and do
> > attract comments, but these should not be technical issues.
> >
> > Given this situation, I have instructed the editors to not pay too much
> > attention
> > to the PICS entries until the draft reaches a reasonably stable state.
> > Otherwise,
> > the editors would waste far too much time adding and removing PICS
entries
> > as normative portions of the draft came and went. For instance, note
that
> in
> > the last draft, Clauses 10 and 11 were combined into a single clause.
This
> > is
> > a major change in the format of the draft. If the Clause 10/11 editor
had
> > previously spent a lot of time generating PICS entries, most of his work
> > would
> > have been wasted. Further, I defined "reasonably stable" as "draft
> achieves
> > passing ballot"; once the draft reaches 75% approval, there is a good
> chance
> > that it will not experience major surgery such as the above. Hence my
> > instructions
> > to the editors were to hold off on the PICS until this point. You will
> note
> > the
> > obvious incompatibility between these instructions, and the view that
the
> > draft
> > should not be allowed to pass WG ballot without a complete PICS!
> >
> > Regarding ballot: it is worth pointing out that the IEEE Standards staff
> do
> > not
> > even recognize any ballot excepting Sponsor Ballot. In some of the other
> > (non-802) groups, especially the smaller ones, it is not uncommon to
avoid
> > the
> > entire process of WG ballot and go directly to Sponsor Ballot.
Therefore,
> it
> > would seem that there is not a whole lot of harm done in starting down
the
> > road to Sponsor Ballot, especially if Sponsor Ballot is the "real"
> balloting
> > process anyway.
> >
> > I would also note that even if the draft passes (and in theory we then
go
> to
> > voting
> > only on changed sections), it would be grossly irresponsible of the WG
to
> > throw
> > out a technical comment pointing out an actual error in a portion of the
> > draft,
> > on the grounds that it was not open to comment. In my experience, the
> option
> > of disallowing comments on unchanged portions of the draft is used
> sparingly
> > and only to achieve convergence. Further, note that once a draft passes,
> ALL
> > technically binding comments linked to negative votes go to the SEC,
> whether
> > they were made on portions of the draft that were open to comment or
not.
> > Hence the WG has a strong incentive to resolve all comments, without
> > resorting
> > to tactics that could be interpreted as suppressing dissenting views.
> >
> > All that being said, I reiterate: it is up to us to vote responsibly.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > - Tom Alexander
> > Chief Editor, P802.17
> >
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Kshitij Kumar" <kkumar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> > To: "'Mike Takefman'" <tak@xxxxxxxxx>; "RPRWG" <stds-802-17@xxxxxxxx>
> > Sent: Thursday, May 08, 2003 10:09 AM
> > Subject: RE: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
> >
> >
> > >
> > > Folks,
> > >
> > > My interpretation of voting APPROVE (with or without comments) on this
> > draft
> > > is that we are agree that the draft is complete (possibly with
optional
> > > modifications).
> > >
> > > It is important for us to realize that this draft is still far from
> > > complete.
> > >
> > > For instance, one important area that is clearly lacking is the
> > > specification of the PICS Proforma. This crucial information will be
the
> > > basis for claiming conformance with the standard.
> > >
> > > For example, Clause 5, Page 86 contains an editors note "This
standards
> > > draft shall not be considered to be complete until this PICS proforma
is
> > > complete. The editors estimate that the level of completeness of this
> PICS
> > > proforma is 5%." For Clause 6, Page 155 has a similar editor's note,
> > except
> > > the level of completeness is 10%.
> > >
> > > And please look at the other PICS Proforma clauses as well.
> > >
> > > Since the editors have explicitly stated that the present draft is
> > > incomplete, and since an APPROVE vote on this draft would mean that we
> are
> > > in agreement with the draft (as it is today) becoming the standard, we
> > need
> > > to vote DISAPPROVE to give the editors time to complete the draft,
> > including
> > > the PICS Proforma, based on comments received this time.
> > >
> > > Because of the critical nature of the PICS Proforma, we must have a
full
> > 30
> > > day review of the final PICS once it is completed, and not be forced
to
> > > review it in a short recirculation ballot cycle, IMHO.
> > >
> > > After the review period - PICS entries - like anything else new coming
> > into
> > > the draft - should be voted into the draft, one PICS entry at a time.
> > >
> > > I also do not agree with the view that the PICS can be ignored until
> > sponsor
> > > ballot - they are too critical to be left till so late in the cycle.
> > >
> > > Further, allowing ONLY changed portions of the draft to be commented
> > > against, forces us away from the preferred method of improving the
> quality
> > > of the draft overall - since only a subset can be improved. I agree we
> > need
> > > to do so according to the recirc process, but this means we should not
> > > really be trying to be in recirculation until after the next meeting.
> > >
> > > Therefore, if we are looking to progress the standard as quickly as
> > > possible, we must DISAPPROVE this draft, which has been declared
> > incomplete
> > > by the editors, and to task the editors with completing the next draft
> > > including all of the new PICS, have those voted in one by one by the
WG,
> > and
> > > then to have that draft balloted prior to the next meeting.
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > Kshitij Kumar.
> > > Director, System Architecture,
> > > Lantern Communications.
> > > 408-521-6806
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Mike Takefman [mailto:tak@xxxxxxxxx]
> > > Sent: Monday, May 05, 2003 1:20 PM
> > > To: RPRWG
> > > Subject: [RPRWG] [Fwd: Ballot Reminder - your thoughts?]
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > RPRWGers,
> > >
> > > the ballot runs for approximately 1 more week, please
> > > remember to get your votes in. Failure to respond to
> > > ballots will result in loss of voting rights.
> > >
> > > A reminder about process.
> > >
> > > A passing ballot does not imply that the draft will
> > > be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot. The WG must vote to
> > > forward the draft for Sponsor Ballot. What a passing
> > > ballot does is begin the recirculation process on
> > > the draft. Once we are in recirculations, you may
> > > only comment on changed portions of the draft or on
> > > areas affected by a change elsewhere. Hence the process
> > > begins to become bounded. As a WG, we should not forward
> > > a draft for sponsor until we have reached the point where
> > > improvements to the draft / concensus have been maximized.
> > >
> > > Thus your approve vote can be interpreted as either a
> > > belief that it is time to start getting the draft
> > > ready for sponsor ballot, or that you believe that it
> > > is time to begin to recirculate. Both are equivalent.
> > >
> > > In terms of voting approve with comments versus
> > > dissaprove with comments. If you fundamentally believe
> > > that something is broken, then you may choose to vote
> > > disapprove with comments. If you believe that something
> > > is broken, but believe that you can work with your
> > > fellow RPRWGers to resolve the comments you can vote
> > > approve with comments. There is risk in voting approve
> > > with comments, in that if the comment is not resolved
> > > to your satisfaction, but the ballot passed and the
> > > text is unchanged, then you are out of luck until the
> > > draft comes back in sponsor (and you end up being a
> > > member of the sponsor group, which is not guaranteed).
> > >
> > > Note: You may change your vote from approve to disapprove
> > > during recirculations. All you have to do is comment on
> > > a changed portion of text.
> > >
> > > Should a recirculated ballot fail, we are back to commenting
> > > on the entire draft (and the number advances to the next
> > > major revision).
> > >
> > > cheers,
> > >
> > > mike
> > >
> > > --
> > > Michael Takefman tak@xxxxxxxxx
> > > Manager of Engineering, Cisco Systems
> > > Chair IEEE 802.17 Stds WG
> > > 2000 Innovation Dr, Ottawa, Canada, K2K 3E8
> > > voice: 613-254-3399 cell:613-220-6991
> > >
> >
>