RE: [802.21] Request for IETF MIPSHOP charter review
Yoshi,
Good comments.
Stefano
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>From: ext Yoshihiro Ohba [mailto:yohba@TARI.TOSHIBA.COM]
>Sent: Monday, February 27, 2006 7:26 PM
>To: STDS-802-21@listserv.ieee.org
>Subject: Re: [802.21] Request for IETF MIPSHOP charter review
>
>My comments on MIPSHOP charter are below.
>
>Technical:
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>(5) Work on areas of mutual interest to IEEE 802.21 and MIPSHOP:
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>- Produce the required protocol enhancements or specifications
>for IP-based support of Media-Independent Information, Command
>and Event Services.
>
>- Documents: draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt (transport of
>802.21 information elements over IP),
>draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-support-XX.txt (transport of 802.21
>services over IP, including security aspects) "
>
>What is the difference between "transport of 802.21
>information elements over IP" and "transport of 802.21
>services"? The latter transport seems to cover the former.
>Please clarify.
>
>Does draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt include
>definition of higher-layer information elements? If the
>answer is yes, the charter should explicitly state so.
Ok, can be done.
>
>Do these two documents only contain solutions part? If the
>answer is yes, the WG should also work on separate document(s)
>for problem statement and requirements used as the basis for
>developing the solutions. If the answer is no, the charter
>should explicitly state that problem statement and
>requirements are part of one or both of the documents.
ok
>
>
>Editorial:
>
>"
>A liaison with IEEE 802.21 has been established, and access to
>the IEEE 802.21 drafts is granted to mipshop members.
>Interested members need to send a request to the WG chairs in
>order to obtain a copy of the current IEEE 802.11 draft.
>"
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>s/802.11 draft/802.21 draft/
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>
>"
>JAN 06 Submit draft-ietf-mipshop-mih-info-elements-XX.txt to
>IESG for publication as Proposed Standard "
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>s/JAN 06/JAN 07/
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>
>Regards,
>Yoshihiro Ohba
>
>
>
>On Thu, Feb 23, 2006 at 05:22:48PM -0500, Yoshihiro Ohba wrote:
>> (This email is being sent according to the consensus in today's
>> teleconference on IS requirements ad-hoc.)
>>
>> Please review the proposed IETF MIPSHOP WG charter and send your
>> comments to the 802.21 reflector by Feb 27 (Mon) midnight. I will
>> consolidate the comments and send them to the IETF as part of IETF
>> liaison process.
>>
>> The proposed charter is available at:
>> http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mipshop/current/msg02413.html
>>
>> Best regards,
>> Yoshihiro Ohba
>>
>>
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