Re: [802.3_1PPODL] Announcement - D1.1 Task Force Review: IEEE P802.3bu
All -
Shahar correctly points out that the link to the draft in the email (copied below) is broken - although the text appears to point to the right place, the link behind the text points to the old 1.0 draft. Please don’t comment against that draft (again) - instead, go to the private area on the website and download the correct D1.1 to comment against:
http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/private/index.html
You all should have the password from the meetings - if you don’t have it, please drop me an email and I’ll respond privately.
Also, you’ll notice that change-bar version of D1.1 appears to be an edit from D0.2, not D1.0. Andy assures me that that’s due to an idiosyncrasy of the Frame change tracking feature, and the text that appears in D1.1 is in fact up-to-date.
Please comment liberally and return comment files to Andy (cc: me) by the end of Sunday 28 June AoE - this avoids any schedule overlap with the bt draft.
Dave
> On Jun 23, 2015, at 8:53 PM, Shahar Feldman <sfeldman@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> Hi Dave,
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> FYI - The below link opens a file named P802.3bu D1.0.pdf and while the date shows correctly in the title (26 March 2015) the Draft number is indicated as IEEE 802.3bu™ /D1.0
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> Draft 1.1 should be used for commenting and may be downloaded from:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/private/P802.3bu_D1.1.pdf
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> -Shahar
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> From: Dave Dwelley [mailto:ddwelley@xxxxxxxxxx]
> Sent: Tuesday, June 23, 2015 7:36 PM
> To: STDS-802-3-1PPODL@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [802.3_1PPODL] Announcement - D1.1 Task Force Review: IEEE P802.3bu
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> EXTERNAL EMAIL
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> Dear Colleagues:
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> This is the announcement of the review of the IEEE P802.3bu Power over
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> Data Lines Task Force draft amendment D1.1. Instructions for accessing
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> the draft and submitting comments follow this announcement.
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> IEEE P802.3bu is an amendment to IEEE Std 802.3-2012 which is available
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> through the Get 802 program at the URL:
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> http://standards.ieee.org/getieee802/802.3.html
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> The Project Authorization Request for this amendment is posted at:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/P802d3bu_PAR.pdf
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> The Five Criteria Responses for this amendment are posted at:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/P802d3bu_5C.pdf
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> The Objectives for this amendment are posted at:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/P802d3bu_Objectives.pdf
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> ___________________________________________
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> REVIEW SCOPE:
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> The scope of the review is the entire IEEE P802.3bu D1.1 Draft.
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> REVIEW OPEN:
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> Tuesday, 23 June 2015
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> REVIEW CLOSE:
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> Sunday, 28 June 2015 11:59pm AOE
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> HOW TO ACCESS THE DRAFT
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> The draft is posted for Task Force review purposes only, and neither the
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> draft nor access information should be copied or redistributed to others
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> in violation of document copyrights.
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> Draft 1.1 should be used for commenting and may be downloaded from:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/private/P802.3bu_D1.1.pdf
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> Username and password: distributed at meetings
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> The document is posted in Adobe "pdf" document format and can be
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> downloaded and printed if desired. If you do not have Adobe Acrobat
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> Reader, it is available for free downloading from Adobe at:
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> URL: http://www.adobe.com/prodindex/acrobat/readstep.html
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> _______________________________________
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> HOW TO SUBMIT COMMENTS
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> Acceptable comment types:
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> E = Editorial
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> ER = Editorial Required (an Editorial comment that the commenter feels
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> very strongly about)
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> T = Technical
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> TR = Technical Required (a Technical comment that the commenter feels
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> very strongly about)
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> For further information regarding comments, please see
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bj/public/may12/diab_01_0512.pdf
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> 1. Prepare your comments in one of the following two ways:
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> a. You are STRONGLY REQUESTED to use the comment tool in the TF private
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> area at the URL:
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> URL: http://ieee802.org/3/WG_tools/filemaker/index.html
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> Please download and read the Comment Tool Tutorial:
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bj/public/may12/diab_01_0512.pdf
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> To use the tool, extract all components into a folder and do not move any
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> component from that folder as this will cause the executable to not work
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> correctly. The tool is:
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> Comment_Tool_Generic_Solution.exe
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> The comment tool runs under Microsoft Windows. It has also been run in VM
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> environments on other platforms.
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> b. To submit comments in text (ASCII) form, please use the form below.
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> This will make it possible for the editor to properly record and track all
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> submissions. Make as many copies of the template as necessary and submit
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> as an ASCII text file or as part of your e-mail.
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> PLEASE NOTE: The ASCII method involves a manual transcription, hence you
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> are recommended to check your comments to ensure accurate transcription
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> when the comment file is made available. Please use the comment tool above
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> if possible.
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> ------CUT AND PASTE TEXT BELOW THIS LINE ONLY PLEASE--------
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> CommentID: (Leave Blank)
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> CommenterName:
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> CommenterEmail:
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> CommenterPhone:
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> CommentType: (E, ER, T, or TR)
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> Comment:
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> --------------------end comment template------------------
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> 2. Send your comments to: agardner@xxxxxxxxxx , CC:
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> ddwelley@xxxxxxxxxx and paste into the subject line:
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> IEEE P802.3bu Power over Data Lines Task Force D1.1 comments
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> This can be done with this link:
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> <mailto:stds-802-3-ballot@xxxxxxxx?subject=IEEE P802.3bu Power over Data Lines Task Force D1.1 comments>
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> _____________________________________________________________
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> Thank you for your participation in this review and careful review of the
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> draft.
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> Andy Gardner
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> Chief Editor, IEEE P802.3bu Power over Data Lines Task Force
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> Linear Technology
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> agardner@xxxxxxxxxx
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> Dave Dwelley
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> Chair, IEEE P802.3bu Power over Data Lines Task Force
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> http://www.ieee802.org/3/bu/index.html
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> Linear Technology
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> ddwelley@xxxxxxxxxx
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