Re: [802.3_GEPOF] P802.3bv/D1.1 Task Force Review
Dear Bob-san and Ruben-san,
Sorry for submitting comments in text form again.
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CommenterName: Satoshi Takahashi
CommenterEmail: pof-promotion@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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CommenterCompany: POF promotion
1.
Clause: 115
Subclause: 115.4.1
Page: 109
Line: 54 (Table 115-3)
CommentType: (T)
Comment:
Maximum center wavelength shall be 665 nm, as discussed at the last PMD ad-hoc meeting.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
Change "670" to "665"
RemedyEnd:
2.
Clause: 115
Subclause: 115.5.9
Page: 114
Line: 9
CommentType: (E)
Comment:
The IEC document number is 61300-3-53.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
Change "61300-3-54" to "61300-3-53"
RemedyEnd:
3.
Clause: 115
Subclause: 115.5.9
Page: 115
Line: 1
CommentType: (T)
Comment:
i) Only the lower bound limit that yields the worst performance is sufficient to be specified.
ii) The same EAF can be applied for all link types at TP3.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
Change existing sentence to "The MPD measured per EAF at TP2 or TP3 shall be upper than the lower bound limits defined in Figure 115-3 and 115-4."
RemedyEnd:
4.
Clause: 115
Subclause: 115.5.9
Page: 115
Line: 29 to 44
CommentType: (T)
Comment:
See comment 3.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
i) Change "Figure 115-4 - EAF template specification at TP3. Type A, B"
to "Figure 115-4 - EAF template specification at TP3. Any link type"
ii) Delete "Figure 115-5 - EAF template ......" and "Figure 115-6 - EAF template ......".
RemedyEnd:
5.
Clause: 115
Subclause: 115.8
Page: 117
Line: 4
CommentType: (E)
Comment:
“A4a.2” is a sub-category, not a type.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
Change “types A4a.2” to “sub-category A4a.2”
RemedyEnd:
6.
Clause:
Subclause:
Page: 121
Line: 26 to 28
CommentType: (E)
Comment:
The IEC document number in the column “Value/Comment” is not correct.
CommentEnd:
SuggestedRemedy:
Change existing sentence to "Duplex cable with multimode optical fiber sub-category A4a.2 as specified in IEC 60793-2-40”
RemedyEnd:
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Looking forward to seeing you in Waikoloa.
Satoshi
On 2015/06/13, at 15:42, ROBERT GROW wrote:
> Dear Colleagues:
>
> This is the announcement of the electronic IEEE 802.3bv Task Force review on the draft amendment IEEE P802.3bv/D1.1 Gigabit Ethernet Over Plastic Optical Fiber. For TF review, we will use the same tools used for Working Group ballot (described below). This draft will also be presubmitted for consideration at the July 802.3 plenary meeting to Working Group ballot.
>
> SCOPE:
> As a Task Force review, the scope is the complete IEEE P802.3bv draft.
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> REVIEW CLOSE:
> Friday 3rd July 2015 23:59 AOE (anywhere on earth)
>
> PROJECT DOCUMENTS:
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> Our PAR, CSD and Objectives are available at: www.ieee802.org/3/bv
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>
> Thank you for your participation in this Task Force review and careful review of the draft.
>
> Bob Grow
> Chair, IEEE 802.3bv GEPOF Task Force
> bob.grow@xxxxxxxx
> (M): +1 858 705 1829
>
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>
> INSTRUCTIONS FOR COMMENTING ON: IEEE P802.3bv draft D1.1
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> Instructions for accessing the draft and submitting comments follow.
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> HOW TO ACCESS THE DRAFT
> The draft is posted for your review for balloting purposes only, and neither the draft nor access information should be copied or redistributed to others in violation of document copyrights.
>
> The IEEE P802.3bv GEPOF draft D1.1 may be downloaded from:
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> URL: http://www.ieee802.org/3/bv/private/P8023bv_D1p1.pdf
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> Username: [Please use the IEEE 802.3 or IEEE P802.3bv username]
> Password: [Please use the IEEE 802.3 or IEEE P802.3bv password]
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> If you are a GEPOF or 802.3 participant and have not copied the username/password when presented at a meeting, please send an email and I will provide the TF username/password to you.
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> This document is posted in Adobe "pdf" document format and can be downloaded and printed if desired. If you do not have Adobe Acrobat Reader, it may be downloaded for free downloading from Adobe from:
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> HOW TO SUBMIT COMMENTS
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> Acceptable comment types:
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> 1. Prepare your comments in one of the following two ways:
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