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| Yan- Just took a look at your docs. I have some suggested changes. PAR Project Title: Currently: Standard for YANG data model definitions for Ethernet Should be: Standard for YANG data model definitions for Ethernet station management Your PAR date items 4.2 and 4.3 appear to be pretty aggressive for a new work. There is no downside to giving yourself more time. PAR 5.5 (Slide 8) Currently: YANG is specified in Request For Comment (RFC) 6020 and amendments / corrigenda Should be: YANG is specified in IETF Request For Comment (RFC) 6020 and amendments / corrigenda CSD Managed Objects slide Currently: This project will develop YANG models from Clause 30 objects... Should be: This project will develop YANG models of the definitions from Clause 30 objects... Broad Market Potential Currently: The proposed amendment will enable the use of YANG model for a wide variety... Should be: The proposed standard will enable the use of YANG
model of 802.3 managed objects for a wide variety... Compatibility Add a bullet: This work is fully aligned to and coordinated with equivalent work taking place in 802.1. Add a bullet: This work will not be compatible with SNMP. This is an obsolete requirement. Technical Feasibility Currently: Other SDOs (e.g., MEF and IETF) have already defined YANG data models and there is... Should be: Other SDOs (e.g., MEF and IETF) have already defined YANG data models for managing and operating Ethernets and there is... DRAFT OBJECTIVES Page 2 Currently: Define a YANG module for Ethernet passive optical networks (EPON). Should be: Define YANG modules for Ethernet passive optical networks (EPON) Optical Network Units (ONU) and Optical Network Terminals (ONT). Best regards, Geoff Thompson On Apr 27, 2016, at 7:57 PMPDT, Zhuangyan (Yan) <zhuangyan.zhuang@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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