Jose,
Thanks for your contribution of actual wording. I've modified the PAR
slides again to include the suggested changes.
All,
I've also included some suggested word changes (in red) as proposed
by Gary McAlpine that I missed earlier this morning. Please continue
your review.
Thanks,
Ben
Jose Morales wrote:
Ben,
I have explained my opinion in my previous mail. According it,
this
is my proposal for wording changes:
>> To improve the performance of an 802.3 link in terms of
latency and
frame discard
>> in the presence of congestion.
>> Congestion due to oversubscription results in frame
discards. This
project will
>> enable an exchange of congestion control information, which
will
define a means
>> of decreasing frame discard and permit decreased latency.
I propose:
"To improve the performance of an 802.3 link in terms of latency
and
frame discard in order to avoid congestion.
In case that the congestión appears, this project will enable
an exchange of congestion control information, which will define a
means
of decreasing frame flow and permit decreased latency."
In my experience, I think tat avoid congestion must be the main
objective.
According my idea, 802.3 must detect the traffic situation an will use
802.2 to control it.
Thanks
Jose
Benjamin Brown wrote:
All,
Thanks to those who responded, especially those with actual
wording changes. I've captured the new wording in additional
slides so everyone can see them in a common format. If there
are additional comments, please feel free to make them. We'll
need to choose between these, probably on Tuesday of next
week, in order to allow this project to move forward.
Thanks,
Ben
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From: owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org
[mailto:owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin
Brown
Sent: Thursday, September 23, 2004 7:36 AM
To: STDS-802-3-CM@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: Re: [8023-CMSG] PAR proposal
Brad, Gadi, Matt, Asif,
Thanks for your review. I've captured Brad's suggested changes
in the first 4 slides of the new attached proposal. I then added a
5th slide which is a markup of the 4th with my changes in response
to some of Matt's comments. If everyone could take another look
at this and let me know what they think of the new document, the
proposed changes or anything else they can think of, I'd very much
appreciate it.
Regards,
Ben
Booth, Bradley wrote:
Ben and all,
Some feedback on this.
Cheers,
Brad
-----Original Message-----
From: owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org
[mailto:owner-stds-802-3-cm@listserv.ieee.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin
Brown
Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2004 4:03 AM
To: STDS-802-3-CM@listserv.ieee.org
Subject: [8023-CMSG] PAR proposal
All,
This is not a full cut at the PAR but covers the more interesting
pieces - Title, Scope, and Purpose. Please review and comment.
Again, this, or something similar, needs to be approved in Ottawa
next week in order to pre-circulate for approval at the WG level
in San Antonio in November. Please give this serious attention
and comment with actual suggested changes.
Thanks,
Ben
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